As Sure As The Sun Rises
A tattered flag33 total reviews
Comment from Diana L Crawford
So endearing! I love history and especially the times of kings and queens. You express beautifully the weary king who silently holds out for God to arrive to his rescue and his reverent faith that his kingdom will survive! There are no errors that catch my eye! Awesome job! :)
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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So endearing! I love history and especially the times of kings and queens. You express beautifully the weary king who silently holds out for God to arrive to his rescue and his reverent faith that his kingdom will survive! There are no errors that catch my eye! Awesome job! :)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much, dear Diana. I am a self taught historian. I write historical pieces from time to time. I love the time of kings and queens, too.
All my best,
Sally xo
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Awesome! I?m self taught also! Love biblical history too! Any ancient history actually -lol
Comment from country ranch writer
He maybe blind but he has other senses that take over to help him see and feel things buy sound and feel. Nice story for this one great locality !
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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He maybe blind but he has other senses that take over to help him see and feel things buy sound and feel. Nice story for this one great locality !
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much, dear Barbara. I appreciate the honoring review and kind comments. It is so good to see your name today!
Sending you my best, as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Sally!
Oh my goodness! So creative and filled with fine dialogue coupled with keen imagery. I did not want your offering to end, but I so loved the ending!
If I may point out two nits:
My Sovereign, it (it is) from your cousin, Lord Balmoral. He sends you his greetings;(no need for any semi-colon) along with men, weaponry, and supplies. Expect them within a fortnight. I verify it is his vermillion seal.
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Hello Sally!
Oh my goodness! So creative and filled with fine dialogue coupled with keen imagery. I did not want your offering to end, but I so loved the ending!
If I may point out two nits:
My Sovereign, it (it is) from your cousin, Lord Balmoral. He sends you his greetings;(no need for any semi-colon) along with men, weaponry, and supplies. Expect them within a fortnight. I verify it is his vermillion seal.
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much, dear Diane. Your excellent review and helpful critique mean so much.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Debbie Pope
Well done, Sally. You could have won the Faith contest with this excellent dialogue. To me that's what it is all about. His majesty knows by faith that his kingdom will survive.
Like I said. This is simply well done. I enjoyed every word.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Well done, Sally. You could have won the Faith contest with this excellent dialogue. To me that's what it is all about. His majesty knows by faith that his kingdom will survive.
Like I said. This is simply well done. I enjoyed every word.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Dear Debbie, thank you for the excellent review and kindest compliments. It is so appreciated.
All my best from the shore,
Sally on vacation xo
Comment from royowen
What a great connection, the sun also rises, "tears may come in the night,but joy cometh in the morning" Psalm 30:5. "At the rising of the sun, till the going down of the same. The Lord's name is to be praised." Oh yes indeed, you've got this one brilliantly right. Well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : It('s) from your cousin...
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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What a great connection, the sun also rises, "tears may come in the night,but joy cometh in the morning" Psalm 30:5. "At the rising of the sun, till the going down of the same. The Lord's name is to be praised." Oh yes indeed, you've got this one brilliantly right. Well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : It('s) from your cousin...
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much, dear Roy. I am so pleased you enjoyed my dialogue only contest entry.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :+)
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Well done Sally
Comment from Irish Rain
Just wonderful Miss Sally.
I'm not at all sure when it comes to reviewing prose, but does this exchange need quotation marks?
I rarely write it, so I don't know.
I like especially, his faith shown at the end.
Blessings...
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Just wonderful Miss Sally.
I'm not at all sure when it comes to reviewing prose, but does this exchange need quotation marks?
I rarely write it, so I don't know.
I like especially, his faith shown at the end.
Blessings...
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much my dear Irish Rain. I loved seeing your name and kind review. For this particular contest, no quotation marks are needed as it is purely dialogue. It makes it neater and cleaner, I guess. I?m so glad you enjoyed this.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
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Oh good! I hope you win!!
Comment from doggymad1
Great work on this one. I love the setting and feel that this could actually be developed into a fully story.
Best of luck in the contest
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Great work on this one. I love the setting and feel that this could actually be developed into a fully story.
Best of luck in the contest
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Dear Freda,
Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind. It means so much for me to see your name and comments.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :+)
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My pleasure Sal x
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a beautiful offering that stirs some really deep feelings in the reader, Lady Sal.... we imagine a medieval castle and an aged Kind defending his borders and a faithful servant -- but most of all, that warm feeling in the pit of your stomach that burns at the base of your eyes when you picture the King there, holding onto the window sill, breathing in the air and knowing, just knowing, when that flag rises... ! ;) ;) A great one, ma'am!! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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What a beautiful offering that stirs some really deep feelings in the reader, Lady Sal.... we imagine a medieval castle and an aged Kind defending his borders and a faithful servant -- but most of all, that warm feeling in the pit of your stomach that burns at the base of your eyes when you picture the King there, holding onto the window sill, breathing in the air and knowing, just knowing, when that flag rises... ! ;) ;) A great one, ma'am!! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;) Yvette :)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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I love all the smiles, first up. I can?t get enough smiles. It is always so infectious and makes me smile. I appreciate you and the wonderful review. I am so pleased you enjoyed my time warp dialogue only contest entry, me lady.
All my best,
Sal xo
Comment from damommy
Well done! I got the entire story from their conversation. It was easy to follow who said what. I like the ending. The blind king 'knew' what the colors looked like and could 'see' them flying.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Well done! I got the entire story from their conversation. It was easy to follow who said what. I like the ending. The blind king 'knew' what the colors looked like and could 'see' them flying.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Thank you so kindly, dear damommy. I am so pleased you liked my dialogue only contest entry. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment from Ulla
Oh, Sally, I loved this. It's a superb dialogue only entry for the contest, and I loved the ending. Yes, although he couldn't see he felt it through his bones.
One minor thing: My sovereign, it from your cousin, = My sovereign, it's from your cousin,
Warm regards. Ulla xx
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Oh, Sally, I loved this. It's a superb dialogue only entry for the contest, and I loved the ending. Yes, although he couldn't see he felt it through his bones.
One minor thing: My sovereign, it from your cousin, = My sovereign, it's from your cousin,
Warm regards. Ulla xx
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Thank you, dear Ulla. I am so pleased you enjoyed this. I love historical-themed pieces and haven?t written one in a few months. You inspired me. I am deeply honored by the six stars and kind compliments.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
