Cherished Gifts
Loves beginning...14 total reviews
Comment from LyndaS
This is lovely. Your phrasing is spot on and I like the flow of this. "Unseen hand", "Most unplanned" Very descriptive. This was almost soothing to me. The art you chose is perfect for this. Love the formatting. An excellent write! Lynda
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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This is lovely. Your phrasing is spot on and I like the flow of this. "Unseen hand", "Most unplanned" Very descriptive. This was almost soothing to me. The art you chose is perfect for this. Love the formatting. An excellent write! Lynda
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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I?m honored you read and grateful for your precious comment! Looking forward to seeing more from you :)
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a well penned piece exuding the essence of love from end to end. The use of couplets enhanced the overall impact of each stanza. The rhyme and meter were consistently solid and fluid throughout. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a well penned piece exuding the essence of love from end to end. The use of couplets enhanced the overall impact of each stanza. The rhyme and meter were consistently solid and fluid throughout. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much! Your review makes my heart sing! xoxo
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Excellent rhyme. enjoyable poem. Very well written and understandable.
Easy to read short poem. No help with this one is needed. Thanks for sharing with us.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Excellent rhyme. enjoyable poem. Very well written and understandable.
Easy to read short poem. No help with this one is needed. Thanks for sharing with us.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much! Your precious time and feedback mean so much to me! xoxo
Comment from lyenochka
I like the lyrical feel of this poem done in four couplets. I get a sense of two people who have found in love, both rare gifts and healing from past pains. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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I like the lyrical feel of this poem done in four couplets. I get a sense of two people who have found in love, both rare gifts and healing from past pains. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
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Thank you! That was my goal exactly! A new love helping to heal old wounds xoxo
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Cherished gifts are meant to be shared. Glad that she
has a friend or family to lean in on for comfort. The
world way beats us up. Good rhymes and I like your
unseen hand. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Cherished gifts are meant to be shared. Glad that she
has a friend or family to lean in on for comfort. The
world way beats us up. Good rhymes and I like your
unseen hand. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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You are so kind to leave such an awesome review! Thank you so much!!
Comment from Artasylum
This is loving, tender and a very caring poem and all of the parts of love are elevated by these qualities... great write for Another love poem writing prompt entry... yours, Diana
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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This is loving, tender and a very caring poem and all of the parts of love are elevated by these qualities... great write for Another love poem writing prompt entry... yours, Diana
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I am overwhelmed by the precious feedback everyone is giving me! I am thrilled that you appreciate! xoxo
Comment from juliaSjames
Smooth flowing, perfectly rhymed and metered tender poem of reciprocated love.
Feelings of warmth and comfort emanate from this write.
Very well done. Good luck in the prompt.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Smooth flowing, perfectly rhymed and metered tender poem of reciprocated love.
Feelings of warmth and comfort emanate from this write.
Very well done. Good luck in the prompt.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you immensely! I appreciate your feedback so much!
Comment from DR DIP
well you certainly ticked the writing prompt perfectly Diana, That is Hallmark material I must say and is the perfect length for one.
I know I will enjoy your poetry and will try to give positive and supportive feedback and maybe my humble suggestions where i feel is warranted for improvement in my eyes, But hey my critiques are only my personal opinions others might interpret differently.
thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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well you certainly ticked the writing prompt perfectly Diana, That is Hallmark material I must say and is the perfect length for one.
I know I will enjoy your poetry and will try to give positive and supportive feedback and maybe my humble suggestions where i feel is warranted for improvement in my eyes, But hey my critiques are only my personal opinions others might interpret differently.
thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Xoxoxo! Your feedback is most welcome! And thank you for checking this entry out!
Comment from Three14
Love the simple rhyme scheme, and the powerful message of the last stanza - truly love in balance - very beautiful visual. Thank you very much for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Love the simple rhyme scheme, and the powerful message of the last stanza - truly love in balance - very beautiful visual. Thank you very much for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much! Your feedback is so precious to me!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written love poem about the little cherished gifts we shared with the ones we love the most and we will never forget those memories we gathered.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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A very well-written love poem about the little cherished gifts we shared with the ones we love the most and we will never forget those memories we gathered.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you for taking time to read my little poem! The feedback is so appreciated xoxo
