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The Second Amendment

Protecting The second Amendment

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Comment from babykoala
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I loved the pace of this poem. I am not American but I felt very patriotic reading this! Brilliant rhyming and pace and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.xx

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
    That says allot not being from America but yet feel so patriotic when reading it, as always thank you for your great words.
    Larry
Comment from Josh Walters
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I mean, if nothing else the forefathers thought we should have not only the moral obligation but the ability to overthrow our government if the corruption gets out of hand, and damn is not looking good at the moment ;) Shooting is also one of funnest sports around.

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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Thank you Josh for your review and the 4 stars, your words were right on. Take care.
    Larry
Comment from Willie P. Smith
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I agree whole heartedly. I believe the feces will hit the oscellator when they try to take away the second amendment. People kill people, not guns. Maybe we should take away the guns of the Secret service that
protects the liberal politicians. Excellent post.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
    Thanks Willie so glad you liked it. And thank you for the generous 6 stars. it is much appreciated for sure.
    Larry
Comment from Ogden
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I have a serious objection to the NRA and other groups protecting the sale of weapons used for mass murder, and not for hunting. Unfortunately, many folks believe NRA propaganda claiming their opponents are attempting to repeal the second amendment and confiscate everyone's guns.

Hunting is ingrained in our culture, and most Americans support protecting hunters' rights,
and we also support protecting our schools, churches and public places from massacre by weapons of warfare.

To our credit, our first-amendment rights to free speech guarantee you and me, and all of us, the freedom to air our many different beliefs.
I bet you agree with that, Larry.
:o)
Ogden (Don)






 Comment Written 24-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
    Thank you Ogden for your review and the 5 stars. To be honest I don't think about the NRA a whole lot one way or the other. But I do care about our rights and I do feel strongly that the left is trying to infringe on our gun rights. So I take a stand on this principal alone. Take care and have a great day.
    Larry
reply by Ogden on 24-Jun-2019
    You're welcome, Larry. The government's not going to interfere with your gun ownershhip. The NRA has scared the bejesus out of folks that "the left" is out to ban guns. So more and more people are buying guns, anticipating a ban. The more guns sold, the more powerful the NRA gets.

    Enjoy your guns.

    Don
Comment from Hitcher
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I believe in the US that there conversation is a bit like stepping into a hornets nest. Some of those against change are prepared to guard that freedom with their lives or so I've heard... and those for change are prepared challenge them regardless of the outcome. A very dangerous standoff.
Here in NZ our gun laws have just been scaled right back since we had our first racially charged mass shooting. No one is allowed to own automatic weapons anymore. The government has just adopted a buy back scheme which is going to cost them millions BUT most people seam ok with it : )

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
    Thank you Hitcher for the good review and the 5 stars. I have heard various things about guns where you live, not sure if it is a good thing at all, but can't say to much I suppose. Take care and have a good rest of the day.
    Larry
Comment from diamondbogle
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I grew up in a small town in Kansas. I could shoot a gun before I could read. My dad was very proactive about teaching me and my sisters proper gun safety and how to handle a multitude of different firearms. As an adult I still love to hunt, I also have my CC permit. I loved your poem and the spirit of the gun owners in this country.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
    Thank you Diamond for your great review and the 5 stars So glad you were taught properly how to shoot, and glad you have your CC, that is so wonderful. You have a great day and if you like check out some of my other work as well.
    Larry
Comment from Artasylum
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As in all things in my life I may not like what you have to say... But, I welcome the discussion... keep on writing... looking forward... thanks for the read. yours, di

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
    Well thank you for the words you have said and for giving me 5 stars it is most appreciated. You have a great day for sure.
    Larry
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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You have called a spade a spade. That is what is written and that is what shall be carried through. As long as those held rights are in the right hands, all is well. The concentration should not be on the firearms but on the arms that fire. The people! The rules for gun buyers should be so stringent as to who is able or not able to buy. There is the crux of the matter. Also, there should be rules about storage in homes making the firearm non accessible to other than the owner. Your piece is very well said.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
    Thank you so much Raffaelina for your great words and your generous 6 stars so much appreciate. Allot of what you said is right on for sure, glad you really like this piece. I have other Patriotic/Spiritual Poems in my portfolio if you care to read them. Wake up America, The White House, We the People, One Nation Under God. The last one is farther along in my portfolio as I wrote it a long time ago. Take care.
    Larry
Comment from Habib Oke
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Very intriguing! Your poem has a great deal of motivational effects. It gives that we should unite to fight for our freedom and rights. For United we stand and rule and divided we fall. I like that. Write to motivate. Thumb up.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
    Thanks you Habib for the nice review and the 5 stars I am so glad you liked it. Take care and have a great day.
    Larry
reply by Habib Oke on 23-Jun-2019
    My pleasure!
Comment from Ms. Q
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So so true. So very true. We have different views on what freedom is to us individually. It can be a thought a way of life or just a freedom. People are dying to have it and feel it everyday. Keep up
The good work loves the poem

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
    Thanks you Ms. Q for the nice review and the 5 stars I am so glad you liked it. Take care and have a great day.
    Larry
reply by Ms. Q on 23-Jun-2019
    Your welcome.