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Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Summer Breezes "Poetry and Short Stories by George Medina Martinez
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Comment from Lance S. Loria
Certainly an appropriate poem for the season. It's hot in Texas now. Good 5-7-5 syllable count. I enjoyed the read. No edits or adjustments necessary or suggested.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Certainly an appropriate poem for the season. It's hot in Texas now. Good 5-7-5 syllable count. I enjoyed the read. No edits or adjustments necessary or suggested.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments.
God's Blessings to you.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Summer Breezes, has the right set up and gives a thumbnail explanation of the uneven heating and cooling of the earth to cause the prevailing winds which fill the vacuum created by rising hot air.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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This 5-7-5, Summer Breezes, has the right set up and gives a thumbnail explanation of the uneven heating and cooling of the earth to cause the prevailing winds which fill the vacuum created by rising hot air.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the review and positive encouragement. Blessings.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes the summer breezes are most welcome when the weather is hot and I enjoyed your write. The summer is, however, a long time coming in England! Your words are much enjoyed and I welcome the heat, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Yes the summer breezes are most welcome when the weather is hot and I enjoyed your write. The summer is, however, a long time coming in England! Your words are much enjoyed and I welcome the heat, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the Review, Time, and Kind words.