Shhhh...Give Me Your Hand
The moment that it all becomes real...15 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Beautiful sentiment.Beautifully articulated. I also really appreciated the artwork that you have chosen here. It is the perfect complement to this piece. Well done!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Beautiful sentiment.Beautifully articulated. I also really appreciated the artwork that you have chosen here. It is the perfect complement to this piece. Well done!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful words!
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You're Welcome!
Comment from Ava Wilson
A very beautiful poem about the joys of feeling your baby move during pregnancy. There's something so magical about that moment. You did a great job with this. I love the picture you chose to pair with it. Good luck!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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A very beautiful poem about the joys of feeling your baby move during pregnancy. There's something so magical about that moment. You did a great job with this. I love the picture you chose to pair with it. Good luck!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful words!!
Comment from Dr. Nad
Shhhh...Give Me Your Hand is the capture of that divine moment when love, life, and Lord come to a new apex. Your creativity continues to shine through, not only in the kaleidoscope of words that you use but also in the arrangement of the words and letters. Well done. You have a finely honed craft of taking the simple and breaking it down so that mere mortals can see the complexity of what we have been considering to be mundane.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Shhhh...Give Me Your Hand is the capture of that divine moment when love, life, and Lord come to a new apex. Your creativity continues to shine through, not only in the kaleidoscope of words that you use but also in the arrangement of the words and letters. Well done. You have a finely honed craft of taking the simple and breaking it down so that mere mortals can see the complexity of what we have been considering to be mundane.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful words of praise and encouragement -- truly, they mean a lot!!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Yes indeed. That is truly the time of truth. Not only are we aware of a new life, but of the magic and the wonder of God. How else can there be such constancy of life? A lovely poem.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Yes indeed. That is truly the time of truth. Not only are we aware of a new life, but of the magic and the wonder of God. How else can there be such constancy of life? A lovely poem.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful words!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Taking stock and taking in the moment to remember and to savour is riddled throughout your words, we often miss life when we blink our eyes, your words resonating with me, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Taking stock and taking in the moment to remember and to savour is riddled throughout your words, we often miss life when we blink our eyes, your words resonating with me, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful words!
