Standing in line for a Passing.
You don't always get what you hope for!43 total reviews
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Brilliant. People are like that. They wait toy ou to eclipse and grab what it says on the paper. They ogle on property that they had even not contributed anything to. Greed, greed greed. Good leave your false teeth to them. I am old and I am thinking of doing it too.
Benny
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Brilliant. People are like that. They wait toy ou to eclipse and grab what it says on the paper. They ogle on property that they had even not contributed anything to. Greed, greed greed. Good leave your false teeth to them. I am old and I am thinking of doing it too.
Benny
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I want to express my appreciation for your taking the time to read and rate my poem. Thank you so very much for your five beautiful stars and your kind words about my contest entry "Standing in line for a Passing."
Comment from ShyWri
HAhaha! he line "I've never been really popular" foreshadows the ending when relatives with late-blooming concern will reap an apt reward. Thank you for the poem.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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HAhaha! he line "I've never been really popular" foreshadows the ending when relatives with late-blooming concern will reap an apt reward. Thank you for the poem.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
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I want to express my appreciation for your taking the time to read and rate my poem. Thank you so very much for your five beautiful stars and your kind words about my contest entry "Standing in line for a Passing."
Comment from misscookie
Now this is on e for the books
I am truly lose for words you captured my attention from the start please tell me who has false teeth like these
I don't know what one would do with those teeth once the dear ones has depart.... I'm I reading the poem wrong
Tell me if I"m right or wrong.
Thank you for sharing
Thanks for the chuckle
cookie
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Now this is on e for the books
I am truly lose for words you captured my attention from the start please tell me who has false teeth like these
I don't know what one would do with those teeth once the dear ones has depart.... I'm I reading the poem wrong
Tell me if I"m right or wrong.
Thank you for sharing
Thanks for the chuckle
cookie
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I want to express my appreciation for your taking the time to read and rate my poem. Thank you so very much for your five beautiful stars and your kind words about my contest entry "Standing in line for a Passing."
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Your very welcome and, I'm sure your words help many
Cookie
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
And I'm thinking "I hope you are joking". If the message wasn't so sad I would say this poem is hilarious. You do have a very good sense of humor. Good Luck.
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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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And I'm thinking "I hope you are joking". If the message wasn't so sad I would say this poem is hilarious. You do have a very good sense of humor. Good Luck.
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I want to express my appreciation for your taking the time to read and rate my poem. Thank you so very much for your five beautiful stars and your kind words about my contest entry "Standing in line for a Passing."
Comment from the13thpoet
I liked your poem. I found it quite humorous. They say you can't always get what you want, but if you try sometimes you might just find you get what you need. I would love to meet someone who has a need for those things....lol. Good job! Thanks for sharing and make me smile.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I liked your poem. I found it quite humorous. They say you can't always get what you want, but if you try sometimes you might just find you get what you need. I would love to meet someone who has a need for those things....lol. Good job! Thanks for sharing and make me smile.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I want to express my appreciation for your taking the time to read and rate my poem. Thank you so very much for your five beautiful stars and your kind words about my contest entry "Standing in line for a Passing."
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
THAT's FUNNY. If the teeth in the picture are the ones to be inherited, I would politely request that I be disinherited. It's a very good humor poem. I laughed out loud at the last line. I didn't want to scroll too fast because I was sure there was a punchline coming after reading the first three stanzas. Well done. -Robert-
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THAT's FUNNY. If the teeth in the picture are the ones to be inherited, I would politely request that I be disinherited. It's a very good humor poem. I laughed out loud at the last line. I didn't want to scroll too fast because I was sure there was a punchline coming after reading the first three stanzas. Well done. -Robert-
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I want to express my appreciation for your taking the time to read and rate my poem. Thank you so very much for your five beautiful stars and your kind words about my contest entry "Standing in line for a Passing."
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You're welcome.
Comment from fm wright
Truly a humorous poem! When I started reading it I had no idea exactly where it was going, but for the fact that it had something to do with false teeth. Anyway, I truly enjoyed reading it. It all flowed so very well in thought and rhyme. I wish you the very best with this entry!
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Truly a humorous poem! When I started reading it I had no idea exactly where it was going, but for the fact that it had something to do with false teeth. Anyway, I truly enjoyed reading it. It all flowed so very well in thought and rhyme. I wish you the very best with this entry!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I want to express my appreciation for your taking the time to read and rate my poem. Thank you so very much for your five beautiful stars and your kind words about my contest entry "Standing in line for a Passing."
Comment from royowen
It sounds like your estate is about as prosperous as mine is, I've got half ' n half. Beautfully written, an excellent entry in this contest. Written in 9999 in smooth, articulately woven together, in abcb rhyming, great job, blessjngs, Roy
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It sounds like your estate is about as prosperous as mine is, I've got half ' n half. Beautfully written, an excellent entry in this contest. Written in 9999 in smooth, articulately woven together, in abcb rhyming, great job, blessjngs, Roy
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I want to express my appreciation for your taking the time to read and rate my poem. Thank you so very much for your five beautiful stars and your kind words about my contest entry "Standing in line for a Passing."
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Most welcome
Comment from LisaMay
Oh my gosh, you really don't like your heirs do you! What a horrible set of uncared-for teeth. Your heirs will be hoping they are gold ones, but no such luck. Your poem touches on a few raw home truths when it comes time for seeing who gets what... the vultures move in to snap up the assets.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Oh my gosh, you really don't like your heirs do you! What a horrible set of uncared-for teeth. Your heirs will be hoping they are gold ones, but no such luck. Your poem touches on a few raw home truths when it comes time for seeing who gets what... the vultures move in to snap up the assets.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I want to express my appreciation for your taking the time to read and rate my poem. Thank you so very much for your five beautiful stars and your kind words about my contest entry "Standing in line for a Passing."
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Truly nothing happens as we think or expect or as per our plan or wish, everything happens in its own cause and effect relation; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Truly nothing happens as we think or expect or as per our plan or wish, everything happens in its own cause and effect relation; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I want to express my appreciation for your taking the time to read and rate my poem. Thank you so very much for your five beautiful stars and your kind words about my contest entry "Standing in line for a Passing."
