Ready for the fiery pit
A Voice For The Unborn.6 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Let mom should not think about the unborn baby's going for sacrilege, killing of the unborn is a crime at every point; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Let mom should not think about the unborn baby's going for sacrilege, killing of the unborn is a crime at every point; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Thanks Al
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very powerful offering, Jose, that takes on the subject that so many wish not to talk about... your chosen form to start with the actions of the 'dancer' and ends with the finality of murder is very well done and provides the necessary impact for such an awful act that is looked upon far too lightly.... Thanx for your passion and your words! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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A very powerful offering, Jose, that takes on the subject that so many wish not to talk about... your chosen form to start with the actions of the 'dancer' and ends with the finality of murder is very well done and provides the necessary impact for such an awful act that is looked upon far too lightly.... Thanx for your passion and your words! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Thanks Yvette, sorry I hadn't answered I'm back in Brownsville.
Comment from Sally Law
Thank you for this, dear poet. You have a comrade in me as this insanity continues. Our nation is in deep trouble if we do not back away from this madness. Never mind, we already are in trouble. The abortion clock ticks every second, another little person extinguished. Now, we line up to cast our votes for those who say, "yes" and, "more"--even to full term! My daily prayer is our national repentance of these horrific crimes against humanity.
Thank you for the poem. If the Christians won't speak up, who will?
Always my best to you and yours,
Sally
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Thank you for this, dear poet. You have a comrade in me as this insanity continues. Our nation is in deep trouble if we do not back away from this madness. Never mind, we already are in trouble. The abortion clock ticks every second, another little person extinguished. Now, we line up to cast our votes for those who say, "yes" and, "more"--even to full term! My daily prayer is our national repentance of these horrific crimes against humanity.
Thank you for the poem. If the Christians won't speak up, who will?
Always my best to you and yours,
Sally
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Thank you Sally for the stars and for seeing something many people frown on---the truth.
Comment from aryr
Wow, Jose, this was truly amazing. It took innocence to a different level and in a different direction. It presented the thoughts and the feelings of those who are condemned to die but will not die depending on the state. But then perhaps death by confinement is indeed death.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Wow, Jose, this was truly amazing. It took innocence to a different level and in a different direction. It presented the thoughts and the feelings of those who are condemned to die but will not die depending on the state. But then perhaps death by confinement is indeed death.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Thanks Alie. I was angry when I wrote it.
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Then I am glad FanStory was an easy way to express your anger and frustration rather than physical. It was indeed different in so many ways.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write about abortion and the sadness in it. No woman takes abortion lightly and the consequences of it last for many years, your words resonated with me, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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A poignant write about abortion and the sadness in it. No woman takes abortion lightly and the consequences of it last for many years, your words resonated with me, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Thank Dolly sorry I hadn't answered I'm back in Brownsville.
Comment from patcelaw
Man is wanting to deny that we are fearfully and wonderfully made and that it is okay to murder if we do not like the circumstances that bring us to the point of murder. This poem has a powerful message.
Patricia
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Man is wanting to deny that we are fearfully and wonderfully made and that it is okay to murder if we do not like the circumstances that bring us to the point of murder. This poem has a powerful message.
Patricia
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Thank you Patricia.