Feel the Passion
A Trinet Entry16 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written trinet poem about finding our rhythm and let our passion ignites deep within our heart, mind and soul and live our life with flair and be happy.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
A very well-written trinet poem about finding our rhythm and let our passion ignites deep within our heart, mind and soul and live our life with flair and be happy.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Comment from Ava Wilson
This is a great poem and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I am still looking for my rhythm and I'm hoping by the time I retire I will find it. Ha!! The picture choice was a great addition. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
This is a great poem and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I am still looking for my rhythm and I'm hoping by the time I retire I will find it. Ha!! The picture choice was a great addition. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece! Thanks for dropping by to read and review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I like your style here and living life with flare! This is the only way to live in my opinion, if you have no passion for life you may as well give up! He he he, wise words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
I like your style here and living life with flare! This is the only way to live in my opinion, if you have no passion for life you may as well give up! He he he, wise words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on this clever and succinct piece! I'd never heard of a Trinet before this. Seems like a enjoyable form of poetry to write! Good luck with the competition!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
Congratulations on this clever and succinct piece! I'd never heard of a Trinet before this. Seems like a enjoyable form of poetry to write! Good luck with the competition!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
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Comment from the13thpoet
Good poem under the constraints of the format. So many times these poems just seem like random words to comply with the format. This one felt complete and told a story. Good job!
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
Good poem under the constraints of the format. So many times these poems just seem like random words to comply with the format. This one felt complete and told a story. Good job!
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Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
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Comment from Debbie Pope
Oooh.! I like this. What flare you write with! I love "when passion ignites deep." And, "let it rise to the surface." Your artwork makes your poem complete.
I thoroughly enjoyed this. Perfect selection of words. Each one more than carried its weight.
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
Oooh.! I like this. What flare you write with! I love "when passion ignites deep." And, "let it rise to the surface." Your artwork makes your poem complete.
I thoroughly enjoyed this. Perfect selection of words. Each one more than carried its weight.
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Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
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Thank you for reading and sharing your insights!