The Singing Cloak
Waiting on true love...12 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem of tercets contains a strong metaphors for love. It can be a cloak to keep you warm and a lullaby to calm you in hard times. Finding the perfect one to share your heart is hard. But, when you do,it is wonderful.
Congrats on tying for second place in the contest.
Keep writing
Happy New Year
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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This poem of tercets contains a strong metaphors for love. It can be a cloak to keep you warm and a lullaby to calm you in hard times. Finding the perfect one to share your heart is hard. But, when you do,it is wonderful.
Congrats on tying for second place in the contest.
Keep writing
Happy New Year
dragonpoet
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much! This is definitely one of my favorite pieces. So excited to be recognized by committee - not an easy task! Happy New Year!
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You are most kindly welcome.
It was well worth the recognition
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Comment from Joan E.
Congratulations on having your Free Verse well received in the recent contest. I admired the image of the "singing cloak" and your tercets. Thank you for adding the contemplative, parallel artwork as well. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2019
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Congratulations on having your Free Verse well received in the recent contest. I admired the image of the "singing cloak" and your tercets. Thank you for adding the contemplative, parallel artwork as well. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I love this one and overjoyed it was so well received. Appreciate you also enjoyed it! xoxo
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I am pleased one of your favorite creations brought such a positive response. More cheers- Joan
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Thank you again, Joan! Happy New year!!
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Have a peaceful and productive, new year- Joan
Comment from LisaMay
Dear Diana, virtual 6! I am delighted for you that this exquisitely tender, hopeful, poem has been awarded the accolade of a contest prize. "The Singing Cloak" is definitely a poem to be proud of. xx
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
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Dear Diana, virtual 6! I am delighted for you that this exquisitely tender, hopeful, poem has been awarded the accolade of a contest prize. "The Singing Cloak" is definitely a poem to be proud of. xx
Comment Written 27-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
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Thank you soooo much! I love this poem. Something I wrote years ago and happen to find it again going through some old stuff. Revamped just a bit, and really turned out better than I expected. So happy it impressed the committee. Thank you always for your sincere support. It means so much to me! xoxo
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I'm pleased you rediscovered your poem. Your revamp touches worked a treat with the contest judges!
Comment from Sally Law
I could not figure out how I missed this, and then I saw the date on it. This was the week before I fanned you. Whew. I thought I was losing it.
Congratulations on this outstanding poem and second place win!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
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I could not figure out how I missed this, and then I saw the date on it. This was the week before I fanned you. Whew. I thought I was losing it.
Congratulations on this outstanding poem and second place win!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 27-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much! Yes I entered it quite a while ago. Definitely one of my favorite! So glad you appreciated reading it! hope you have an awesome weekend! xoxo
Comment from A. Willow Bends
WOW! I was just reviewing some of the Club Members entries! (like I have time, right?) For an open 10 minute write, you nailed it on this! I have been used to reading your short pieces and then, THIS? It blew me away.
Soft, gentle, intense emotion. Flowing, lovely in every aspect with a wonderful visual chosen. Great job!
A. Willow Bends
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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WOW! I was just reviewing some of the Club Members entries! (like I have time, right?) For an open 10 minute write, you nailed it on this! I have been used to reading your short pieces and then, THIS? It blew me away.
Soft, gentle, intense emotion. Flowing, lovely in every aspect with a wonderful visual chosen. Great job!
A. Willow Bends
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thanks but this is for a different contest, not a club entry! I must say, it is one of my favorites for sure! Appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
Comment from Anne B Francis
How lovely, I love the way you have created each stanza especially the strength of the fabric in other words the strength of their love. Precious lullaby so soft one can almost imagine the love breathing from the heart.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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How lovely, I love the way you have created each stanza especially the strength of the fabric in other words the strength of their love. Precious lullaby so soft one can almost imagine the love breathing from the heart.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much! I?m so happy that this touches you so much! I feel that I am truly reviving my life?s purpose xoxo
Comment from Ronni
I love this 'cloak' theme and revelry as a keepsake kind of promise
and protection while 'preparing heart for true love'! It wafts through
the senses so evocatively and enticingly from line to line; a true
joy and inspiration to read and reflect more deeply within.
Great contest entry, best of luck!
Best wishes always, Ronni
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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I love this 'cloak' theme and revelry as a keepsake kind of promise
and protection while 'preparing heart for true love'! It wafts through
the senses so evocatively and enticingly from line to line; a true
joy and inspiration to read and reflect more deeply within.
Great contest entry, best of luck!
Best wishes always, Ronni
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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Well it?s finally 12 o?clock and hopefully when I?m through I can nominate you as I wanted to! Congrats on your honorable mention for last month! I would give you 10 nominations but they only let me nominate you once-dang! This is my favorite review by you so far!
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Thanks dear...for all your wonderful support, compliments and appreciations!
Sincerely appreciated! Happy
you liked the review..well deserved! Have a fabulous week too!
Gratefully always, Ronni
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Well I don?t know when the day actually starts for the new month but it wouldn?t let me this time but I will find you again my dear!
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It's ok dear...fine as it is and
no fret as to when or if...
Appreciations same always!
Ronni
Comment from Chelsea Caffey
Wow, Diana. This is so beautiful. Your words are so compelling. You bring both romance and mystery into this poem. You've done a great job of activating your thoughts and questions while also asking others to consider theirs. Wonderful.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Wow, Diana. This is so beautiful. Your words are so compelling. You bring both romance and mystery into this poem. You've done a great job of activating your thoughts and questions while also asking others to consider theirs. Wonderful.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Thanks! Your comment and ?stars? are so greatly appreciated!
Comment from damommy
This is beautiful with all the metaphors, consonance, and assonance. She's waiting for just the right one who will appreciate all she have to give. Well done, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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This is beautiful with all the metaphors, consonance, and assonance. She's waiting for just the right one who will appreciate all she have to give. Well done, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thank you. It was written a long time ago and i came across it buried in the pages of a book i had. Forgot all about writing it LoL!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a lovely entry for the Free Verse Contest. The presentation is stunning as you created impact while maintaining a high taste level. I thought the theme very clever as you use the concept of a cloak to create an image of what genuine love is like - all encompassing, protective, and warming. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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This is a lovely entry for the Free Verse Contest. The presentation is stunning as you created impact while maintaining a high taste level. I thought the theme very clever as you use the concept of a cloak to create an image of what genuine love is like - all encompassing, protective, and warming. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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No, thank you for your beautiful review! It means so much!