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Family Ties Volume two.

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Second book Of Series.

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Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello
I had fun reading An Adventure Of Alice's Hero....
"Superman" made me wonder why you kept saying

"Sooo....What's my name, Michael?"
"Do we got any asprin, Alice?"

"Ditto...Thaaaaat's Me."

"Yes. I'll get aspirin for you right away.
Happy Father's Day, Michael."

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2019

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This poem has a nice theme, finding one's desired character in and around in action, on happy Father's Day, fantasy adventure goes on, though not expressed, well said, Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2019

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You always make be smile Rhonnie with you little ditties, you always show your fun and cheeky side in these dialogue poems, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2019