Piss Foam
Ode contest entry14 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Love the cheek, Ron. I'd say reading about Piss Foam is only for the most stalwart among us and then we go and look at the beautiful sunset. Kidding.
Excellent ode to the commode, and us. Many thanks for sharing.
Gloria
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Love the cheek, Ron. I'd say reading about Piss Foam is only for the most stalwart among us and then we go and look at the beautiful sunset. Kidding.
Excellent ode to the commode, and us. Many thanks for sharing.
Gloria
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Lol, yeah, we always go to the sunsets. Haha. Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Glorie. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece. have a great day.
Ron
Comment from LisaMay
Thank you for raising your glass to my courage to read something about piss foam. When it is in a humor category it is always worth a visit, whatever a poem is called, just to see whether my humor is in sync with someone else's. Actually, in Aussie and NZ 'piss foam' would more usually be thought to refer to the froth on a glass of beer - the head.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thank you for raising your glass to my courage to read something about piss foam. When it is in a humor category it is always worth a visit, whatever a poem is called, just to see whether my humor is in sync with someone else's. Actually, in Aussie and NZ 'piss foam' would more usually be thought to refer to the froth on a glass of beer - the head.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Lisa. Yeah, someone else mentioned the head of beer thing too. I never heard of it. Lol. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Thank you again. Have a great night.
Ron
Comment from CD Richards
OK, well, you were getting five stars from me until I read your footnote, so it's good you thought to include it!
This is an absolute hoot, and well done on taking the piss so expertly.
All that said, in case anyone reads through these reviews, let me state I'm appalled and offended by this crass piece.
Great job, hope this wins.
Craig
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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OK, well, you were getting five stars from me until I read your footnote, so it's good you thought to include it!
This is an absolute hoot, and well done on taking the piss so expertly.
All that said, in case anyone reads through these reviews, let me state I'm appalled and offended by this crass piece.
Great job, hope this wins.
Craig
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Lol. Thank you for the fantastic review and the huge sixer, Craig. I was just in one of those moods. Not real sure how this ridiculous idea came to mind but I went with it. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a great day. Thank you again.
Ron
Comment from misscookie
Oh my goodness this is to much
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
In my mind I thought you were writing about the form on top of a glass of beer
Than as I read On I think your writing about something else
This is what I call a cookie's food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing
cookie
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Oh my goodness this is to much
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
In my mind I thought you were writing about the form on top of a glass of beer
Than as I read On I think your writing about something else
This is what I call a cookie's food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing
cookie
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Cookie. Someone else mentioned the head of beer thing too. I haven't heard it referred to like that before. It makes sense though. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars for this silliness. Have a wonderful day.
Ron
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Your very welcome now that's something to thing abut
Have a blessed evening
Cookie
Comment from Dean Kuch
Well, I gotta admit, Anonymous Poet, curiosity got the best of me and I couldn't help but read your entry.
I understand that curiosity also killed the cat, so... there is that, ahem.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Well, I gotta admit, Anonymous Poet, curiosity got the best of me and I couldn't help but read your entry.
I understand that curiosity also killed the cat, so... there is that, ahem.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Hahaha. Thank you for the great review and cartoon, Dean. It's too funny. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. Have a great week.
Ron
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Anytime, Ron.
~Dean
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
ha ha ha ha ha :))
I saw the title and thought, 'I have to see where this is going!' LOL
Caught the rhyme in every other line.
The photograph and first stanza were made for each other.
This is so humorous, and I do wish you the best in the contest :)
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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ha ha ha ha ha :))
I saw the title and thought, 'I have to see where this is going!' LOL
Caught the rhyme in every other line.
The photograph and first stanza were made for each other.
This is so humorous, and I do wish you the best in the contest :)
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Gale. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at all this silliness. I was just in one of those moods, lol. Have a great day.
Ron
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Ron, silliness and laughing is good for the soul. Thank you!
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Ron, your humor and 'silliness' is such a delight. Thank YOU!
Comment from Beri Bee
Thank you! I dutifully read all the entries if I'm going to vote--so, ode to my duty (it can join your piss). I'm awfully glad I read this! The cheering is wonderful. Rhymes and line-length perfection! (I feel a bit sorry that you even need to explain why you used wet instead of whet but I also think that I understand and appreciate your deference.) AWESOME POEM!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I dutifully read all the entries if I'm going to vote--so, ode to my duty (it can join your piss). I'm awfully glad I read this! The cheering is wonderful. Rhymes and line-length perfection! (I feel a bit sorry that you even need to explain why you used wet instead of whet but I also think that I understand and appreciate your deference.) AWESOME POEM!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, BB. Yeah, a couple folks mentioned the whet so I added the author notes. Lol. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. I was just in one of those moods, haha. Have a great rest of your weekend. Thank you again.
Comment from Cindy Warren
How could I not click onto something called 'Piss Foam'? It promised to be an original, and it was. I get so tired of the achy breaky heart stuff. It turned out to be an ode to me, and great fun. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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How could I not click onto something called 'Piss Foam'? It promised to be an original, and it was. I get so tired of the achy breaky heart stuff. It turned out to be an ode to me, and great fun. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Yes, those heart jerkers get about tiresome, that's for sure. Thank you for the fantastic review and gracious stars, Cindy. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a wonderful week.
Ron
Comment from Ava Wilson
Ok, so you're getting six stars for this one! I'll admit I was intrigued by the title and you didn't disappoint. I literally laughed out loud and will have a difficult time getting "piss foam" out of my head.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Ok, so you're getting six stars for this one! I'll admit I was intrigued by the title and you didn't disappoint. I literally laughed out loud and will have a difficult time getting "piss foam" out of my head.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Ava. Yeah, I was just in one of those moods, haha. I dearly appreciate the generous stars. Mainly, I'm glad you had a chuckle at this ridiculous piece. That's all I'm really going for, to make a couple people laugh with my deranged humor. Thank you again, Ava. Have a great week.
Ron
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Demented and deranged humor are two of my favorite things!!! I caught myself thinking of your poem every time I went to the bathroom yesterday, lol. I voted for you and hope you win!!!
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Haha. I came second place with it. I write a lot of silly stuff on here. Thank you for the support, Ava. I'm glad your twisted too, lol. Have a great day.
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Ron
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Twisted is way too nice of a word to describe how my mind works. You should have gotten 1st place in my opinion. I am a fan of yours now for sure. I'll make that official in just a second.
Comment from Mark D. R.
OK, you are right, the title enticed me to read and now review your posting.
It is funny and your rhyme scheme adds to your entry.
I liked: bubbled pee phrase!
Good luck in the contest. I think you made your point!
Mark
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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OK, you are right, the title enticed me to read and now review your posting.
It is funny and your rhyme scheme adds to your entry.
I liked: bubbled pee phrase!
Good luck in the contest. I think you made your point!
Mark
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Mark. I appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Ron
