The Good Shepherd
He cares for His sheep!3 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
This is a wonderful ode to our Good Shepherd, Jesus our Lord and Savior.
You described His love for His sheep beautifully;
the invitation at the end, wooing others to seek out the Good Shepherd, was an excellent ending to your ode.
The artwork, I admit, caught my attention. Good choice. Loved your rhyme and all the detail and thought you put into this beautiful write.
I wish you the very best in the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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This is a wonderful ode to our Good Shepherd, Jesus our Lord and Savior.
You described His love for His sheep beautifully;
the invitation at the end, wooing others to seek out the Good Shepherd, was an excellent ending to your ode.
The artwork, I admit, caught my attention. Good choice. Loved your rhyme and all the detail and thought you put into this beautiful write.
I wish you the very best in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thank you I have the deepest gratitude for your very kind review!
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Not only did I smile, as well as many others, but I have no doubts whatsoever that God above is delighted with this beautiful ode. :)
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I thank you ever so much! Your comments mean a great deal to me.
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The pleasure was all mine :)
Thank YOU!
Comment from mvbrooks
While this is a time-worn message, you've given it a fresh presentation inviting your readers to enjoy the consistent rhyme as they are reminded of this important lesson.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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While this is a time-worn message, you've given it a fresh presentation inviting your readers to enjoy the consistent rhyme as they are reminded of this important lesson.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your comments. I was trying to find a fresh approach.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This ode to Jesus Christ a Good Shepherd, He promised and He did and does the same work as Savior, as He saves you and all men every day; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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This ode to Jesus Christ a Good Shepherd, He promised and He did and does the same work as Savior, as He saves you and all men every day; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your review. Your comments mean a great deal to me.