Ode to mom
An ode poem.3 total reviews
Comment from Habib Oke
What a wonderful poem. Moms are wonderful in our lives and just like water, she's our indispensable companion. You have put it well and it showed that you value and appreciate your mother. O God bless our mothers as they have blessed us while we were small.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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What a wonderful poem. Moms are wonderful in our lives and just like water, she's our indispensable companion. You have put it well and it showed that you value and appreciate your mother. O God bless our mothers as they have blessed us while we were small.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thanks for the insightful review. I am hoping it will make her happy to be subject of her very own poem. I am blessed to have her as my mom, cheers, j
Comment from the13thpoet
l enjoyed your poem. I liked the word choice and the format of your poem, however the end seemed a bit premature. It felt a bit incomplete, like you could have said more but maybe got stumped or rushed the end. Anyway that's just my opinion and your poem was indeed enjoyed. It was almost like reading a hallmark card. Good work.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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l enjoyed your poem. I liked the word choice and the format of your poem, however the end seemed a bit premature. It felt a bit incomplete, like you could have said more but maybe got stumped or rushed the end. Anyway that's just my opinion and your poem was indeed enjoyed. It was almost like reading a hallmark card. Good work.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Welcome to fanstory. I was not stumped or rushed, believe me, and wrote what I wanted to convey. It is an ode, not a tome. Cheers.
Comment from JLR
Your Odes makes me smile with wonder. Having such a mom must have been a joy, makes desire to be adopted by one so dear, thanks for the wonderful words.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Your Odes makes me smile with wonder. Having such a mom must have been a joy, makes desire to be adopted by one so dear, thanks for the wonderful words.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Yes I share her with my friends when they need a mom. She is 92 now and in perfect health. She came to see me in Africa a couple years ago for a few months, making her way across the world alone. So brave and adventurous. Thanks for your thoughtful review, cheers.