The Gift To Write
Monorhyme Contest Entry6 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Nad
The Gift To Write Is a very insightful poem that invites us to step away from the mundane typical view of the art of writing, and walk into a place of exquisite beauty, created by God our Creator. In this place of beauty, if we open our mind, we will see more than just what the natural eye can see. The mind of the writer is compelled by Joy to drop the veil of secrecy that seems to shroud the inner workings of the creative mind. The writer invites his reader into a place of intrigue and suspense and then discloses the delights of the this blessed calling.
This contest winning poem deserved a little green plus at the end of its five beautiful stars! LOL
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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The Gift To Write Is a very insightful poem that invites us to step away from the mundane typical view of the art of writing, and walk into a place of exquisite beauty, created by God our Creator. In this place of beauty, if we open our mind, we will see more than just what the natural eye can see. The mind of the writer is compelled by Joy to drop the veil of secrecy that seems to shroud the inner workings of the creative mind. The writer invites his reader into a place of intrigue and suspense and then discloses the delights of the this blessed calling.
This contest winning poem deserved a little green plus at the end of its five beautiful stars! LOL
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Wow, thank you for the fantastic review and the big sixer, Dr. N. That is exactly what I was going for. So few really look deeper than what the eyes can see. I really appreciate the generous rating and kind words, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day and thank you again. Excellent review.
Ron
Comment from Bill Schott
This monorhyme, The Gift to Write, presented in four iambic tetrameter quatrains with a cascading line, glorifies the need and ability to pen the words which delight oneself and others. How precious is that gift to write. Nice.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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This monorhyme, The Gift to Write, presented in four iambic tetrameter quatrains with a cascading line, glorifies the need and ability to pen the words which delight oneself and others. How precious is that gift to write. Nice.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Bill. I appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from HarryT
Very fine effort at rhyming and a great message. The pace is good and the flow keeps one reading. I like the repeated lines. Love the picture that accompanies the poem.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Very fine effort at rhyming and a great message. The pace is good and the flow keeps one reading. I like the repeated lines. Love the picture that accompanies the poem.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Harry. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Gail Denham
What a lovely poem - and you managed to rhyme the end words well. It is a gift to be able to write - to express ourselves in this manner - some have no inclination to express themselves.
good job.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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What a lovely poem - and you managed to rhyme the end words well. It is a gift to be able to write - to express ourselves in this manner - some have no inclination to express themselves.
good job.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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That is for sure. Thank you for the fantastic review, Gail. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Comment from tfawcus
An accomplished poem demonstrating that you have polished the precious gift of writing. You've chosen a rhyme that has plenty of alternatives, giving you the scope to write a poem that flows naturally. Added to that, your judicious use of run-on lines adds variety to leaven the monotony of the end rhyming. Finally, it was a wise choice to use this cascading format, allowing you the latitude of a repeating line. This, too, slips down through the verses naturally. I imagine this should do well in the contest. It certainly deserves to.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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An accomplished poem demonstrating that you have polished the precious gift of writing. You've chosen a rhyme that has plenty of alternatives, giving you the scope to write a poem that flows naturally. Added to that, your judicious use of run-on lines adds variety to leaven the monotony of the end rhyming. Finally, it was a wise choice to use this cascading format, allowing you the latitude of a repeating line. This, too, slips down through the verses naturally. I imagine this should do well in the contest. It certainly deserves to.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Wow, thank you for the fantastic review, Tony. I really appreciate the generous stars and kind words. I'm glad you liked my little offering. Have a great rest of your weekend. Thank you again.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am with you all the way here, I actually save myself and write late evening when all is quiet and I look forward to those personal moments with me and my pen, I enjoyed your musing here in your monorhyme poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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I am with you all the way here, I actually save myself and write late evening when all is quiet and I look forward to those personal moments with me and my pen, I enjoyed your musing here in your monorhyme poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the beautiful review, Dolly. I'm glad you liked the piece.
