Using FanArt
So frustrating10 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
And to this poem, I say "Amen"! There's some GREAT artwork on FanArt, but sometimes--like you--I go through eight to ten pages and come up
empty. By then I'm cross-eyed. This is well-written and amusing--but true.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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And to this poem, I say "Amen"! There's some GREAT artwork on FanArt, but sometimes--like you--I go through eight to ten pages and come up
empty. By then I'm cross-eyed. This is well-written and amusing--but true.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thanks Janice
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
I enjoyed your poem even though it is written about frustrating experiences. Your verses are clear and well thought out. I also agree!
May you win the contest, which has my vote!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Dear Author,
I enjoyed your poem even though it is written about frustrating experiences. Your verses are clear and well thought out. I also agree!
May you win the contest, which has my vote!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thanks Deborah
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My pleasure!
Comment from LisaMay
It certainly is exasperating , isn't it!! Your poem expresses this dilemma very well... we wish to support the artists but almost have to choose a picture earlier just so as to be ready in time.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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It certainly is exasperating , isn't it!! Your poem expresses this dilemma very well... we wish to support the artists but almost have to choose a picture earlier just so as to be ready in time.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thanks a lot Lisa May
Comment from Bill Schott
This monorhyme, Using FanArt, presented in two quatrains and a couplet, captures the frustration of the borrowing poet who finds minimal logic to the art which follows the requested topic.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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This monorhyme, Using FanArt, presented in two quatrains and a couplet, captures the frustration of the borrowing poet who finds minimal logic to the art which follows the requested topic.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thanks Bill
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Amazing fit to the contest rules and a very flowing poem. Although I don't have the problem you are presenting throughout. I find it so complimentary and convenient.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Amazing fit to the contest rules and a very flowing poem. Although I don't have the problem you are presenting throughout. I find it so complimentary and convenient.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile here the search engine is diverse and so you get some diverse pictures! He he he, you didn't miss the deadline here though and I wish you luck with the contest, you made me smile and I liked the rhymes honey bee and distillery! Very inventive, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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You made me smile here the search engine is diverse and so you get some diverse pictures! He he he, you didn't miss the deadline here though and I wish you luck with the contest, you made me smile and I liked the rhymes honey bee and distillery! Very inventive, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Thanks Dolly. X
Comment from Six-Star Writer
Really funny, as I've thought the same thing so many times. Either I can't find the art/photo/drawing I want, or the search engine gives me stuff that often doesn't match my entry.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Really funny, as I've thought the same thing so many times. Either I can't find the art/photo/drawing I want, or the search engine gives me stuff that often doesn't match my entry.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from Mark D. R.
You have hit this issue squarely on its head! Hopefully, the FanStory administrators will read the same and adjust the search engine parameters accordingly.
Suggested word substitute for your poetic 'cos. I would use 'cause.
IMHO you will earn many sympathetic reviews and votes for your contest posting (-:
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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You have hit this issue squarely on its head! Hopefully, the FanStory administrators will read the same and adjust the search engine parameters accordingly.
Suggested word substitute for your poetic 'cos. I would use 'cause.
IMHO you will earn many sympathetic reviews and votes for your contest posting (-:
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Thanks Mark
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a funny poem about the true frustration of using fanart. Sometimes it brings up nothing or things that don't match the parameters you set. That is one reason why I don't illustrate most of my poems that aren't supplied with a picture by the pix this club.
This poem is supposes to have all the lines end with the same rhyme you have 2 different rhymes
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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This is a funny poem about the true frustration of using fanart. Sometimes it brings up nothing or things that don't match the parameters you set. That is one reason why I don't illustrate most of my poems that aren't supplied with a picture by the pix this club.
This poem is supposes to have all the lines end with the same rhyme you have 2 different rhymes
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Thanks for the review. I have totally re-written it now I realise that each line should rhyme. Jen
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You're welcome. Glad I could help.
~Joan
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I like the rewrite.
Joan
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So pleased you like it. X
Comment from tfawcus
I enjoyed the humour of this poem. I've experienced much the same sort of frustration. I guess we all have. I notice that you have written this in rhymed couplets. Unfortunately, a Monorhyme is a poem in which all the lines have the same end rhyme, so you have quite a bit of revision needed to avoid disqualification in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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I enjoyed the humour of this poem. I've experienced much the same sort of frustration. I guess we all have. I notice that you have written this in rhymed couplets. Unfortunately, a Monorhyme is a poem in which all the lines have the same end rhyme, so you have quite a bit of revision needed to avoid disqualification in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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I am very greatful to you for pointing out what a Monorhyme is, I obviously read it wrongly. I have totally re-written the poem. Thanks a lot. Jen.
