Forty Years With Full Hearts
June 30, 197928 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very wel-written even-the odds poem about a forty year anniversary at the end of June and the couple look back over the past forty years and realize only true love can last this long.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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A very wel-written even-the odds poem about a forty year anniversary at the end of June and the couple look back over the past forty years and realize only true love can last this long.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Hello Sandra!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an uplifting, warm and loving write and love that lasts means that both parties out the effort in to make sure it does not fail, this is rare these days, I enjoyed your sentiments here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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This is an uplifting, warm and loving write and love that lasts means that both parties out the effort in to make sure it does not fail, this is rare these days, I enjoyed your sentiments here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Hello Dolly!
So pleased you enjoyed.
Lots of laughter and love along the way...
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review!
Comment from juliaSjames
June portrayed as the patron month of weddings and wedding anniversaries in this lovely poem.
It flows soft and serene to the cleverly chosen ending. Welcomes the reader to the contented haven of mature love
The image is a perfect match.
Happy Anniversary.
Blessings, Julia
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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June portrayed as the patron month of weddings and wedding anniversaries in this lovely poem.
It flows soft and serene to the cleverly chosen ending. Welcomes the reader to the contented haven of mature love
The image is a perfect match.
Happy Anniversary.
Blessings, Julia
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Hello Julia!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review.
The image looks just like where we live; the sunsets are incredible...
thank you!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A nice image, presentation,
and topic.
-The syllable count is good,
and you have the required synonyms.
-Congratulations on your upcoming
40th wedding anniversary; that is
a big milestone.
-You have written a very good
poem, celebrating that day.
-It's nice to know you
celebrate it with excitement
and are still happy today!
-Good luck in the contest;
it would be icing on the cake!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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-A nice image, presentation,
and topic.
-The syllable count is good,
and you have the required synonyms.
-Congratulations on your upcoming
40th wedding anniversary; that is
a big milestone.
-You have written a very good
poem, celebrating that day.
-It's nice to know you
celebrate it with excitement
and are still happy today!
-Good luck in the contest;
it would be icing on the cake!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Hello Pam!
I cannot imagine life without my husband. We have truly been blessed.
Thank you for your excellent rating and positive thoughts!
Oh...and I do love icing... :)
Thank you!
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You are very welcome. Glad you like icing-I do, too!
Comment from RodG
June weddings are lovely, but you show that what made this a marriage has lasted forty years--and still counting.
I like how you use two synonyms to begin and end your poem. Rod
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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June weddings are lovely, but you show that what made this a marriage has lasted forty years--and still counting.
I like how you use two synonyms to begin and end your poem. Rod
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Rod, for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
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My pleasure. Rod
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Congratulations for the 40 years and a well conceived poem. You met the syllable formula for the verse but the message carries the work. The story is worth reading regardless of the format. Well Done. -Robert-
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Congratulations for the 40 years and a well conceived poem. You met the syllable formula for the verse but the message carries the work. The story is worth reading regardless of the format. Well Done. -Robert-
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Hello Robert!
Thank you for your excellent rating and positive review.
Those forty years have flown by.
Still best friends.
Thank you again!
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You're welcome.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent even-the-odds poem and entry for the contest
Sounds like June is a special month in many ways
and some things do last, like diamonds, gold and love
Excellent picture and perfect shape for the poem
Well done
Best June wishes
Robert
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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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You've written an excellent even-the-odds poem and entry for the contest
Sounds like June is a special month in many ways
and some things do last, like diamonds, gold and love
Excellent picture and perfect shape for the poem
Well done
Best June wishes
Robert
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Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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June is, indeed, a special month for us, Robert!
Thank you for your excellent rating and positive review.
Still best friends! Those years have truly flown by!
Thank you!
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
I think that your poem is amazing and inspiring. I love poems about long lasting love. I think it is extremely beautiful that the couple took a vow of marriage, and their marriage lasted for forty years. This poem will inspire couples to stay together through the good and bad times. Fantastic poem!
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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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I think that your poem is amazing and inspiring. I love poems about long lasting love. I think it is extremely beautiful that the couple took a vow of marriage, and their marriage lasted for forty years. This poem will inspire couples to stay together through the good and bad times. Fantastic poem!
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Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Hello Jeffrey!
So pleased you enjoyed and did not find my offering maudlin.
Still in love.
Still best friends.
We're two of the lucky ones...
Thank you!
