PBA Title Bound
Bowling Poem contest entry7 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet write and you fulfilled the brief here and gave your poem a warm and ambient glow that won my heart, much enjoyed and a winner for me, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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This is a sweet write and you fulfilled the brief here and gave your poem a warm and ambient glow that won my heart, much enjoyed and a winner for me, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Dolly. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Ron
Comment from karenina
Oh my gosh....How can this cutie pie of a poem not win! I recall setting those tipsy pins up a hundred times! Guess there's no mystery here--- you get my vote!--Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Oh my gosh....How can this cutie pie of a poem not win! I recall setting those tipsy pins up a hundred times! Guess there's no mystery here--- you get my vote!--Karenina
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review and support, Karenina. Yes, they got set up too many times to count, lol. I really appreciate the gracious stars and vote. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Ron
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It was fun! Nice back in the day when kiddos liked games that were not phones or game consoles or the like!--Karenina
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Isn't that the truth. I go visit the grandkids and it's like I'm not even there. Thank you again. Have a great day.
Ron
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You too Ron. Grandkids are the best!--Karenina
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
I enjoyed both of your pictures, which perfectly fit your excellent poem! I smiled throughout my reading and cheered for the outcome! This is a winning contest entry and my best in taking first place! Deborah
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Dear Author,
I enjoyed both of your pictures, which perfectly fit your excellent poem! I smiled throughout my reading and cheered for the outcome! This is a winning contest entry and my best in taking first place! Deborah
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the gracious stars, Deborah. I'm glad you liked my little contest offering.
Ron
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My pleasure
Comment from Rachelle Allen
O! M! G! This is the cutest of the cute!! I LOVE the adorable picture below the (already adorable) poem you have written. You have done SUCH a good job here, and I love the twist at the end. This is going to do SO well in this contest, I am sure. xo
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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O! M! G! This is the cutest of the cute!! I LOVE the adorable picture below the (already adorable) poem you have written. You have done SUCH a good job here, and I love the twist at the end. This is going to do SO well in this contest, I am sure. xo
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Rachelle. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and that you liked my little offering. I hope you have a great rest of your weekend. Thank you again.
Ron
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Your 'little offering' packs a very big impact. It's my pleasure to let you know that. xo
Comment from LyndaS
Sooooo cute!! I liked this. You think you're reading about an amateur bowler who's working at a shot at a title. Then you end this so adorably by having a Grandma talk about her grandson and his plastic bowling set. Very clever. Great poem. Good luck in the vote. Loved the little boy pic! Lynda
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Sooooo cute!! I liked this. You think you're reading about an amateur bowler who's working at a shot at a title. Then you end this so adorably by having a Grandma talk about her grandson and his plastic bowling set. Very clever. Great poem. Good luck in the vote. Loved the little boy pic! Lynda
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Lynda. I had fun while writing this. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked my little offering. Have a great weekend and I hope your next week starts of beautifully as well.
;)
Ron
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Lol!! Pretty sure I will.
Comment from judiverse
This is adorable, and what a great picture. Your rhyme and flow are so smooth, too. A bowling poem with an unexpected ending. The toddler must have had great delight in his game. An excellent interpretation of the adults' interest in what he's doing. Great ending. judi
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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This is adorable, and what a great picture. Your rhyme and flow are so smooth, too. A bowling poem with an unexpected ending. The toddler must have had great delight in his game. An excellent interpretation of the adults' interest in what he's doing. Great ending. judi
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Judi. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Patty Palmer
a very cute poem! I remember my granddaughter being about and she wanted one of the those bowling sets. I remember picking those bowling pins over an over. But she would get so excited and laugh and of course, it would never occur to Grandma not to play like a hundred times a day!
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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a very cute poem! I remember my granddaughter being about and she wanted one of the those bowling sets. I remember picking those bowling pins over an over. But she would get so excited and laugh and of course, it would never occur to Grandma not to play like a hundred times a day!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Lol. That's for sure. Thank you for the excellent review, Patricia. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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You're welcome! Good luck on the contest!
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Thank you.
