Change
We are always evolving6 total reviews
Comment from Aussie
I liked your poem very much. We never really stand still, we evolve and change as the years pass on by. Some grow like the seeds planted, into beautiful flowers. Your poem reminds me of the 'Sower and the Seed' from the Bible. Some seeds took root and flourished, others fell on fallow ground. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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I liked your poem very much. We never really stand still, we evolve and change as the years pass on by. Some grow like the seeds planted, into beautiful flowers. Your poem reminds me of the 'Sower and the Seed' from the Bible. Some seeds took root and flourished, others fell on fallow ground. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your review I am so glad you liked the piece.
Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on this great piece of work! I personally connect with it; as I feel as though alot of change is occurring in my life right now! Wow; a Clarity Pyramid seems as though it'd be tough to write! Good luck with the competition!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Congratulations on this great piece of work! I personally connect with it; as I feel as though alot of change is occurring in my life right now! Wow; a Clarity Pyramid seems as though it'd be tough to write! Good luck with the competition!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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It was tough to write. I really had to think about what I was trying to say.
Thank you for your review and I am so glad you like it.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I am so glad you posted the information about the Clarity Poem. Its intricacy and challenge to write would have been lost on me without it. (though, even without that information, the poem is excellent.) I love the strong words you chose to execute the metamorphosis that describes your life. This is sophisticated and really well done. I applaud your talents! Good luck in the contest! xo
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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I am so glad you posted the information about the Clarity Poem. Its intricacy and challenge to write would have been lost on me without it. (though, even without that information, the poem is excellent.) I love the strong words you chose to execute the metamorphosis that describes your life. This is sophisticated and really well done. I applaud your talents! Good luck in the contest! xo
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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I am so glad you liked it. I am slowly getting back into poetry and have found that I like the ones that use syllable count better. I posted the info about the poem cause it was my first time trying that kind and I thought it might help others who might not be familiar with it. I am so glad it helped.
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Yes, it was definitely the right thing to do because it shows how much work and thinking had to go into it. It's so much more than merely the emotion or the message. xo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I can relate to these words when our worst nightmare takes hold we find out what we are made of. Change is the most challenging thing in life, those who accept it do best, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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I can relate to these words when our worst nightmare takes hold we find out what we are made of. Change is the most challenging thing in life, those who accept it do best, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your review. I am happy that you could relate to the piece.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow -- it's almost as if you are describing the birth of a new person from the old... breaking out of somewhere, of darkness and finding truth! ;) ;) A wonderful offering for the contest ... thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) ;)
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Wow -- it's almost as if you are describing the birth of a new person from the old... breaking out of somewhere, of darkness and finding truth! ;) ;) A wonderful offering for the contest ... thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) ;)
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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I love the way this piece resonates with you. I am so glad you liked it. Thank you for the review
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Simple yet beautifully put! I can feel your journey through the pain bringing you out on the other side a stronger person who is learning to love herself. I think you have conveyed a lot about yourself in inly a small amount of words! Good work and good luck in contest!
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Simple yet beautifully put! I can feel your journey through the pain bringing you out on the other side a stronger person who is learning to love herself. I think you have conveyed a lot about yourself in inly a small amount of words! Good work and good luck in contest!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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I am so glad you liked the piece. It wasn't easy to write, but I love that you connected with it.
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You are very welcome!
