We Are Home At Last
Walking together towards our lovely home.6 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a wonderful offering for this contest that tells of the times of love and sharing of a couple... their times together as wonderful as each is to the other! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the pills! :)
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Such a wonderful offering for this contest that tells of the times of love and sharing of a couple... their times together as wonderful as each is to the other! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the pills! :)
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Ha! Ha! Ha! Yvette, I still get them free. :) Glad you liked it.
Comment from Kathleen S.
Beautiful poetry about the love developed and kept in a relationship of a lifetime and beyond. Very touching and enjoyable to read. Great picture to go with it.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Beautiful poetry about the love developed and kept in a relationship of a lifetime and beyond. Very touching and enjoyable to read. Great picture to go with it.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I changed it a little, it reads nicer now.
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Good sentiment. Often as we age we find that there is less time ahead than what has already passed. I believe you wrote this with a sense of resignation and preparedness. However for some reason I felt a note of melancholy at the end. If you truly believe the end is in sight still try to find the little joys that each day brings.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Good sentiment. Often as we age we find that there is less time ahead than what has already passed. I believe you wrote this with a sense of resignation and preparedness. However for some reason I felt a note of melancholy at the end. If you truly believe the end is in sight still try to find the little joys that each day brings.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you Brenda. I find your words to ring true and changed the third stanza. It may be my last move, but as long as permitted to breathe I smile. :) I wasted to much of life and can't get it back, but I haven't given up. :) Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Well this is a 'real nice poem', it is touching and warm and very romantic and I wish you luck with your retirement home and I am sure you will be very happy in it, this poem marks the start of your latter years, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Well this is a 'real nice poem', it is touching and warm and very romantic and I wish you luck with your retirement home and I am sure you will be very happy in it, this poem marks the start of your latter years, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you Dolly. I changed the third stanza so I can live a little longer. I'm glad you liked it. Say hi to Sally. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This romance poem, We Are Home at Last, runs the intent of the author in with the subconscious message from a higher authority. Home is a dwelling here as well as that final address hereafter. Nice.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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This romance poem, We Are Home at Last, runs the intent of the author in with the subconscious message from a higher authority. Home is a dwelling here as well as that final address hereafter. Nice.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you Bill I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You walked together with your friend, went through seasons of darkness, wandered the way smiling with love, forgotten tears of the past, now to smile, you have reached home; well said, well done. Keep writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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You walked together with your friend, went through seasons of darkness, wandered the way smiling with love, forgotten tears of the past, now to smile, you have reached home; well said, well done. Keep writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thanks Al. Glad you read it.
