Time Is Something...
Oh, it most certainly is!15 total reviews
Comment from Cybertron1986
A gorgeous and intelligent write. It plays with the conscious that it makes me afraid to blink. The message has the reader reflecting on their own choices as well. This is a successfully engaging piece.
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A gorgeous and intelligent write. It plays with the conscious that it makes me afraid to blink. The message has the reader reflecting on their own choices as well. This is a successfully engaging piece.
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I do so appreciate your review - thank you!
Comment from Tony Lendl
Nice piece, I enjoyed the prose very much, the pacing and punctuation slightly less. The message is strong, albeit a bit cliche, but overall solid.
Keep up the good work!
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Nice piece, I enjoyed the prose very much, the pacing and punctuation slightly less. The message is strong, albeit a bit cliche, but overall solid.
Keep up the good work!
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
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thank you.
Comment from Gail Denham
Definately this is something we can all give away - our precious time to help another, to encourage - to pray for someone, to listen -- just to listen. I know how swiftly the time goes - and as I pass birthdays it seems time has put on running shoes.
good poem
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Definately this is something we can all give away - our precious time to help another, to encourage - to pray for someone, to listen -- just to listen. I know how swiftly the time goes - and as I pass birthdays it seems time has put on running shoes.
good poem
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from June Sargent
You summed it all up very nicely with your last stanza. Time is not something we can keep - but certainly something we can give. And the more we do give in the form of caring and sharing, the more happiness we will reap. So, it's not time wasted. Thank you for sharing these words of wisdom.
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You summed it all up very nicely with your last stanza. Time is not something we can keep - but certainly something we can give. And the more we do give in the form of caring and sharing, the more happiness we will reap. So, it's not time wasted. Thank you for sharing these words of wisdom.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
That is a nice piece. Time is the one thing we have absolutely no control over we can only control what we do with our time and you reflect that in your verse. You did a nice job. -Robert-
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That is a nice piece. Time is the one thing we have absolutely no control over we can only control what we do with our time and you reflect that in your verse. You did a nice job. -Robert-
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you!
