Summer Eve
Enjoying a summer evening5 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a nicely described ABC poem of the evening and nature. Written in monorhyme for all lines except the last which shows a well planned piece. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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This is a nicely described ABC poem of the evening and nature. Written in monorhyme for all lines except the last which shows a well planned piece. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your read and your encouraging comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
What a cool picture you've put in my mind's eye, Mystery Writer. I especially liked "flowing cool begins o pleasantly invade." That's a very different slant, and I like it a lot. Good luck in the contest!! xo
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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What a cool picture you've put in my mind's eye, Mystery Writer. I especially liked "flowing cool begins o pleasantly invade." That's a very different slant, and I like it a lot. Good luck in the contest!! xo
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and your comments.
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You're so very welcome!! xo
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
What you thought, how you have enjoyed the summer evening in a restful moment, enjoying the environment and the serenade and promenade; well said, well done. Keep writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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What you thought, how you have enjoyed the summer evening in a restful moment, enjoying the environment and the serenade and promenade; well said, well done. Keep writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your read and comments.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent ABC poem and entry for the contest
with excellent imagery of the various aspects of the evening.
Very nice addition of the rhyme (you could make "sky" plural to have all exact rhymes - skies fade)
Very good commentary line to complete the feeling.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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You've written an excellent ABC poem and entry for the contest
with excellent imagery of the various aspects of the evening.
Very nice addition of the rhyme (you could make "sky" plural to have all exact rhymes - skies fade)
Very good commentary line to complete the feeling.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your read, comments and suggestion. I will edit.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Well done, this paints a lovely picture of the a Summer night. I spent many outside as a kid. I lived on the desert in a tiny town so we could see all the stars. I was amazing. I feel you met all the criteria of the contest in this lovely poem and hope you do well. rox
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Well done, this paints a lovely picture of the a Summer night. I spent many outside as a kid. I lived on the desert in a tiny town so we could see all the stars. I was amazing. I feel you met all the criteria of the contest in this lovely poem and hope you do well. rox
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the read and comments. You are lucky to be able to enjoy the night time sky at full value. I live near Chicago, on a clear night we can see only some of the beautiful heavens. But, we are in for a treat, going to upper Michigan where the stars abound at night.