ABCs of Life
An optimistic alphabet adventure.3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This ABC poem, The ABCs of Life, follows the ABCDS order and suggests that the longest journey (through letters and numbers) is best avoided entirely.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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This ABC poem, The ABCs of Life, follows the ABCDS order and suggests that the longest journey (through letters and numbers) is best avoided entirely.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from humpwhistle
I'm not sure if this effects your loop,
but I think the 'Course' in line three should be 'Coarse'.
Best of luck with the voters.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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I'm not sure if this effects your loop,
but I think the 'Course' in line three should be 'Coarse'.
Best of luck with the voters.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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The loop is not required but your edit is correct. Thank you for your review.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent ABC poem and entry for the contest
incorporating the loop variation in the middle.
There are many things in life we'd like to skip.
A good message embedded in the words.
Meets all the requirements, good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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You've written an excellent ABC poem and entry for the contest
incorporating the loop variation in the middle.
There are many things in life we'd like to skip.
A good message embedded in the words.
Meets all the requirements, good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your review.
