Moonlight Offering
Septolet Poetry Contest Entry11 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Since I've joined this site, I have come across so many different forms of poetry that I didn't know existed. This is the first time I've heard of this style, but you have worked it to perfection. The title, beautiful. The poem short, sweet, and HOT! You said so much with so little and created wonderful visual. Got me a little hot and bothered this morning. I don't think I have ever written such a long review for such a short poem. Again brilliance!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Since I've joined this site, I have come across so many different forms of poetry that I didn't know existed. This is the first time I've heard of this style, but you have worked it to perfection. The title, beautiful. The poem short, sweet, and HOT! You said so much with so little and created wonderful visual. Got me a little hot and bothered this morning. I don't think I have ever written such a long review for such a short poem. Again brilliance!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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LOL!!! So glad you enjoyed it! That's the point, yes? Thank you so much for these awesome comments on this entry. It was fun to write and I appreciate your thoughts very much.
And welcome to FanStory! Lynda
Comment from Bill Schott
This septoplet, Moonlight Offering, has the proper formatting and gives a useful example of gravity performing a needed function at the precise time. Thanks, Big G.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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This septoplet, Moonlight Offering, has the proper formatting and gives a useful example of gravity performing a needed function at the precise time. Thanks, Big G.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Ha! Ha! Too funny! Thank you, Bill. This made my day! Much appreciated.
Comment from LIJ Red
Since there are no visible waves in moonlight itself, I might have said satin waves, then plugged in something else (skimpy? smelly?) to modify lingerie. But then I am known to march to an unusual drum. Looks like a fine septoilet to me.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Since there are no visible waves in moonlight itself, I might have said satin waves, then plugged in something else (skimpy? smelly?) to modify lingerie. But then I am known to march to an unusual drum. Looks like a fine septoilet to me.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review this. I appreciate it.
Comment from kahpot
I have read all the entries, this paints a picture of two lovers as the two stanzas emerge excellently, beautifully presented, following the prompt, a wonderful septolet****kahpot
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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I have read all the entries, this paints a picture of two lovers as the two stanzas emerge excellently, beautifully presented, following the prompt, a wonderful septolet****kahpot
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I appreciate these lovely comments so much. Thanks for taking the time to read and review this. I'm so glad you liked it!
Comment from Poetic Friend
Wow, oh, wow, this poem has it all -- romance, imagery, elegance eroticism, and well-chosen words. Your well-written poem took the reader to sea with you. The poem says a lot in its brevity. I am impressed with this write. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Wow, oh, wow, this poem has it all -- romance, imagery, elegance eroticism, and well-chosen words. Your well-written poem took the reader to sea with you. The poem says a lot in its brevity. I am impressed with this write. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Dearest Poetic Friend. WOW! What a review. Thank you so much for these lovely comments and shiny stars. I'm so glad you liked this. Had a great time writing it. This is very much appreciated. Thanks again.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Septolet poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and the art work you chose went well with your words. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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This is a very well written Septolet poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and the art work you chose went well with your words. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Teri. I'm glad you enjoyed this. I very much appreciate you taking the time to read this and send a review. Thank you for the lovely stars!
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you are so welcome! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You enjoy, feel excited at moonlight offering when subtle waves flow or her lingerie falls to the floor; well said, well done. Keep writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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You enjoy, feel excited at moonlight offering when subtle waves flow or her lingerie falls to the floor; well said, well done. Keep writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much! I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this piece. This was fun to write and I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Septolet about the offering in the moonlight when the silky lingerie falls softly of to the floor, nothing else matters for the rest of the night.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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A very well-written Septolet about the offering in the moonlight when the silky lingerie falls softly of to the floor, nothing else matters for the rest of the night.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Yes, Sandra, pretty much nothing else matters. Thank you for this lovely review. It was fun to write and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Much appreciated.
Comment from DragonSkulls
I came across this piece and asked, "How could this not have a six attached to it already?" How elegantly you lured us in with the first stanza then seduced us with the next. The picture is nothing less than perfect, as not to give away the ending. Excellent contest entry for this form. I wish you luck in the booth. I'm sure it will do well.
DS
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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I came across this piece and asked, "How could this not have a six attached to it already?" How elegantly you lured us in with the first stanza then seduced us with the next. The picture is nothing less than perfect, as not to give away the ending. Excellent contest entry for this form. I wish you luck in the booth. I'm sure it will do well.
DS
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Mr. Skulls. You responded perfectly to the purpose of this write. Seduction. It was so much fun to create. I love these comments and appreciate your well wishes in the vote. Awesome review. Thank you again.
Comment from RodG
Oh, this is erotic and soooo sensual. It is as if you have a camera recording this enchanting moment in slow motion. The septolet is definitely the perfect format here. Rod
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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Oh, this is erotic and soooo sensual. It is as if you have a camera recording this enchanting moment in slow motion. The septolet is definitely the perfect format here. Rod
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Rod. Yes, I was going for the spice here. Lol. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. It was great fun to write. Your comments are much appreciated!
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You are very welcome. Rod
