Evening's Farewell
Sights and sounds of dusk...15 total reviews
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Its amazing that you could create such a beautiful fantasy image from a structured contest. I appreciate the way you cascaded your words down the page, creating an image on its own! Awesome!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Its amazing that you could create such a beautiful fantasy image from a structured contest. I appreciate the way you cascaded your words down the page, creating an image on its own! Awesome!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your awesome review, Diana!
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You are very welcome!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all your syllables in this lovely piece about
nighttime outside. There may be many sounds--then suddenly complete silence, giving the night an appealing air of mystery.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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You have made excellent use of all your syllables in this lovely piece about
nighttime outside. There may be many sounds--then suddenly complete silence, giving the night an appealing air of mystery.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your review!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and nice presentation.
-This is a very good
poem with vivid imagery
that paints a word picture
of nature.
-I like the formatting
of your poem, too.
-You have put a lot
into to this to appeal
to the senses of sound and sight.
-There is so much nature
included, too.
-An excellent poem
that deserves a win in the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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-Very nice image
and nice presentation.
-This is a very good
poem with vivid imagery
that paints a word picture
of nature.
-I like the formatting
of your poem, too.
-You have put a lot
into to this to appeal
to the senses of sound and sight.
-There is so much nature
included, too.
-An excellent poem
that deserves a win in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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My sincerest thanks for your wonderful comments, Pam!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hi Mystery Writer: I like your graphic and the text effect on the word "stretch." I also like the technique of your description of the cicada fading, to nightingale fading, to silence. That was a nice touch of artistry. Very well done. -Robert-
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Hi Mystery Writer: I like your graphic and the text effect on the word "stretch." I also like the technique of your description of the cicada fading, to nightingale fading, to silence. That was a nice touch of artistry. Very well done. -Robert-
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Thank you so very much for your encouraging review, Robert! 8-)
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Patty Palmer
A soothing thought! As daylight ends and night time invite the night time in. You can hear the difference in the air as the night time sounds of those who prey at night takes over. And the sound of the day light animals fade away! Nice soothing feeling!
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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A soothing thought! As daylight ends and night time invite the night time in. You can hear the difference in the air as the night time sounds of those who prey at night takes over. And the sound of the day light animals fade away! Nice soothing feeling!
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Many thanks for your encouraging review.
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you're welcome!
