Big City Water Fun
No beach? No problem!12 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is VERY well-written, exuberant, and appealing. I love the style.
My favorite parts are "Rinse. . . repeat" and "Ocean waves . . . Just
hearsay. Excellent!
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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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This is VERY well-written, exuberant, and appealing. I love the style.
My favorite parts are "Rinse. . . repeat" and "Ocean waves . . . Just
hearsay. Excellent!
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Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thank you for this encouraging review!!!
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is a winner for sure. I would give it six stars if I had another one to give. I love, love, love your cement beach. What a creative way to tie in the word "cement." Cement was the hard word to include (no pun intended) and you just slipped it in like it was nothing. The rhymes are great. Photo's perfect. Every word is a joy to read. This kind of beach is open to everyone. That's nice to know.
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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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This is a winner for sure. I would give it six stars if I had another one to give. I love, love, love your cement beach. What a creative way to tie in the word "cement." Cement was the hard word to include (no pun intended) and you just slipped it in like it was nothing. The rhymes are great. Photo's perfect. Every word is a joy to read. This kind of beach is open to everyone. That's nice to know.
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Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thanx so much for your review -- and glad to see your shining face on the nightly reviews again!!
