Big City Water Fun
No beach? No problem!12 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
Well, Anonymous Poet, if this poem doesn't put you in the mood for those hot summer days coming up nothing will.
When the heat is that sweltering you find and take relief anyway you can possibly get it.
Good modified Minute that includes all of the words required-- a well written entry for the writing prompt.
Good luck!
~Dean
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Well, Anonymous Poet, if this poem doesn't put you in the mood for those hot summer days coming up nothing will.
When the heat is that sweltering you find and take relief anyway you can possibly get it.
Good modified Minute that includes all of the words required-- a well written entry for the writing prompt.
Good luck!
~Dean
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the wonderful review, Dean -- so glad you enjoyed! :)
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My pleasure. ... :-)))
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I absolutely love this poem!! I love the lilting rhyme and perpetual rhythm of it and the joy of its message. (Plus, you found the absolutely PERFECT picture!) My favorite part was "cement beach in month of May." You did a terrific job, and I hope you do well in the contest. (But whether you do or not, it's STILL a terrific poem.) xo
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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I absolutely love this poem!! I love the lilting rhyme and perpetual rhythm of it and the joy of its message. (Plus, you found the absolutely PERFECT picture!) My favorite part was "cement beach in month of May." You did a terrific job, and I hope you do well in the contest. (But whether you do or not, it's STILL a terrific poem.) xo
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Thank you for this wonderful review! Made my day!!
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Kind of exactly like your poem did for MY day!! As a matter of fact, I just voted for it! xo
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Wow!! Thank you!! ;) ;)
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My pleasure! I hope you win. It was a delightful poem.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, this made me smile! This is one way of cooling down in the hot summer heat! Loving your rhymes and flow, a joyful and fun read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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He he he, this made me smile! This is one way of cooling down in the hot summer heat! Loving your rhymes and flow, a joyful and fun read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much. I am so glad you enjoyed this!!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This looks like a lot of fun and the way you describe this event is superb and well thought out. I don't think that these children are thinking about the ocean here. The rhyme and flow is good and the artwork is spot on. I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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This looks like a lot of fun and the way you describe this event is superb and well thought out. I don't think that these children are thinking about the ocean here. The rhyme and flow is good and the artwork is spot on. I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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My sincere thanks for your review!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written nearly a minute poem about the prescribed words that you seem to use well. When there is not an ocean nearby, any puddle of water will feel like waves from the ocean in the heat.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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A very well-written nearly a minute poem about the prescribed words that you seem to use well. When there is not an ocean nearby, any puddle of water will feel like waves from the ocean in the heat.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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My sincere thanks for your review!!!
Comment from Earl Corp
It might help if you bold the words required by the prompt. You did make your poem rhyme, make sense, and entertaining. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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It might help if you bold the words required by the prompt. You did make your poem rhyme, make sense, and entertaining. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Thanx for the review and the helpful suggestion, Earl -- take care! ;)
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
That is a nice poem that clearly meets the rules for composition but it is very entertaining and somewhat nostalgic. I'm reminded of the days when not everyone had a swimming pool but there was always a hydrant close by. It brought to my mind this song from the Lovin' spoonful back in the 60s. "Summer in the city."
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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That is a nice poem that clearly meets the rules for composition but it is very entertaining and somewhat nostalgic. I'm reminded of the days when not everyone had a swimming pool but there was always a hydrant close by. It brought to my mind this song from the Lovin' spoonful back in the 60s. "Summer in the city."
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Yes, I remember that song - so glad my poem made you smile! Thank you for the review.
Comment from kahpot
A wonderful poem, I love the way your use of the required words fit so well with your poem and artwork, combined this work reads and flows beautifully, an excellent entry, best wishes****kahpot
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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A wonderful poem, I love the way your use of the required words fit so well with your poem and artwork, combined this work reads and flows beautifully, an excellent entry, best wishes****kahpot
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your encouraging review and Welcome Back!!! So good to see you back! ;)
Comment from LeannaP
I thought thos was an interesting piece for the contest. I also liked how lengthy the poem was and the mere fact that it rhymed helped as well. Great job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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I thought thos was an interesting piece for the contest. I also liked how lengthy the poem was and the mere fact that it rhymed helped as well. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your review!
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No problem
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
There is no breach, no problem, big city has water fun, fire hydrant is free today for playing kids in water, cement beach, and ocean waves are also accessible; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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There is no breach, no problem, big city has water fun, fire hydrant is free today for playing kids in water, cement beach, and ocean waves are also accessible; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review!
