A Day in the Life of Love
And she'll do it all again tomorrow...9 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
A great poem! A mother's work is never done! I remember those days, in fact I'm still in these days since we are raising our granddaughter and she is 15 so it's play practice then baton class. Keeps me young though,
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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A great poem! A mother's work is never done! I remember those days, in fact I'm still in these days since we are raising our granddaughter and she is 15 so it's play practice then baton class. Keeps me young though,
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much for your review.
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you're welcome!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is a really refreshing slant on this prompt, and you displayed it perfectly: Love is in the DOING way more than in the "saying." Excellent job here, Mystery Writer. I bet this is going to do so well in the contest. Good luck to you. xo
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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This is a really refreshing slant on this prompt, and you displayed it perfectly: Love is in the DOING way more than in the "saying." Excellent job here, Mystery Writer. I bet this is going to do so well in the contest. Good luck to you. xo
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the understanding review, Rachelle!!
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Well, you're doing quite well in the poll, so I not the only one who's "getting it," Miss Talent!! : )
Comment from Sugarray77
Hi Yvette. I enjoyed reading your tribute to motherhood and all of her sacrifices. I would mention that the prompt asks for 10 stanzas with each couplet rhyming. All of the other entries have 10 stanzas, but yours does not. Just wondering.
Melissa
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Hi Yvette. I enjoyed reading your tribute to motherhood and all of her sacrifices. I would mention that the prompt asks for 10 stanzas with each couplet rhyming. All of the other entries have 10 stanzas, but yours does not. Just wondering.
Melissa
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thanx for the heads-up, Melissa -- fixed now... I read it as 'ten lines' (i.e., only the five stanzas) - happens, I suppose!! ;) ;) Glad you have my back!! :) ;) Take care and thanx again! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very wel-written love poem and there is very little that can compare to a mother's love that keeps on giving and never asks for any returns always ready for the next move.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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A very wel-written love poem and there is very little that can compare to a mother's love that keeps on giving and never asks for any returns always ready for the next move.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Many thanks for your review. :-)
Comment from Gail Denham
Good job on this contest entry. And so true - sounds like our place when kids were growing up - for that matter, life still gets awful busy around here, even tho we're retired.
I liked the poem.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Good job on this contest entry. And so true - sounds like our place when kids were growing up - for that matter, life still gets awful busy around here, even tho we're retired.
I liked the poem.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Many thanks for your review.
Comment from James Orton
What a fitting tribute to mums everywhere . You have summed up a mother's Day perfectly. Maybe with q few more lines available , you could have drawn attention to the fact that it all starts again the next day
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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What a fitting tribute to mums everywhere . You have summed up a mother's Day perfectly. Maybe with q few more lines available , you could have drawn attention to the fact that it all starts again the next day
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Many thanks for stopping in for the review!!
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Welcome x
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The busy days for Mum and this is how I think of my daughters who both lead very busy lives juggling work with family and manage to do such an amazing job, your words ring with truth and they are a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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The busy days for Mum and this is how I think of my daughters who both lead very busy lives juggling work with family and manage to do such an amazing job, your words ring with truth and they are a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Many thanks for stopping in for the review!!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
You have written about a different view of love. Most people think love is romance. Most love is not. As a girl told me many many years ago, "Love is a tennis score." I didn't appreciate it but I understood it. You met the rhyming formula so that and the message deserve 5 stars -Robert-
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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You have written about a different view of love. Most people think love is romance. Most love is not. As a girl told me many many years ago, "Love is a tennis score." I didn't appreciate it but I understood it. You met the rhyming formula so that and the message deserve 5 stars -Robert-
Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Many thanks for stopping in for the review!!
Comment from Cybertron1986
Even as a father, I could relate to this pleasant read. I like the rhyme in the list of a busy schedule, which pretty much sums up my entire existence almost every week. It even gave me a nice laugh as to the relatable and humorous bustle of a parent. Nicely presented. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Even as a father, I could relate to this pleasant read. I like the rhyme in the list of a busy schedule, which pretty much sums up my entire existence almost every week. It even gave me a nice laugh as to the relatable and humorous bustle of a parent. Nicely presented. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Many thanks for stopping in for the review!!
