Lady Wind Visits
Nature's Chaos29 total reviews
Comment from Ashtar Zaidi
Great work, inspirational work, i'd love it, the way how you expressed your ideas and views are really excellent, Thank you for sharing these words:).. God Bless You.. ~ Ashtar
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Great work, inspirational work, i'd love it, the way how you expressed your ideas and views are really excellent, Thank you for sharing these words:).. God Bless You.. ~ Ashtar
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Hi, Ashtar. I really appreciate your comments. I wish you the best with your writing.
Sorry for the delayed response. I haven't checked in at FS for several days.
Jon
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It's my pleasure, No problem :)
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your starting with personification in your title and adding the reinforcing artwork. I enjoyed your random rhymes and vivid imagery throughout the piece. Big cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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I admired your starting with personification in your title and adding the reinforcing artwork. I enjoyed your random rhymes and vivid imagery throughout the piece. Big cheers- Joan
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Joan, thanks so much for reviewing. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Willie P. Smith
I'm not too fond of high winds, but I do love enough breeze to make the
tree leaves sing in it's wake. Very well written poem. The description of
the wind is very good.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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I'm not too fond of high winds, but I do love enough breeze to make the
tree leaves sing in it's wake. Very well written poem. The description of
the wind is very good.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thanks very much for your review, Willie. I appreciate it.
jon
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Lady Wind Visits, presented in a unique AABC DDBC EEBC FFBC rhyme scheme, brings the mighty wind to bear on the sea and land until we can take no more.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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This poem, Lady Wind Visits, presented in a unique AABC DDBC EEBC FFBC rhyme scheme, brings the mighty wind to bear on the sea and land until we can take no more.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Bill, thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it. And thanks for your comment on the scheme.
Comment from royowen
I really like the rhythm of this fine work, it seems to mirror the capricious nature of oft used metaphor for restless, yet sometimes comforting reflection of an often visiting friend or foe.well done, beautfully written in rhyming verse.articulate and highly well paced and articulate verses, well done,blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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I really like the rhythm of this fine work, it seems to mirror the capricious nature of oft used metaphor for restless, yet sometimes comforting reflection of an often visiting friend or foe.well done, beautfully written in rhyming verse.articulate and highly well paced and articulate verses, well done,blessings, Roy
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much, Roy, for this review. I really appreciate your comments.
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Most welcome
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO SANTIAGO2: Thank you for sharing this important message to us. Like our sun, "Old Faithful," our "Lady Wind," comes and goes. They know that the law of nature is: :What goes around comes around. You have expressed that well here. Good job, Santiago2. This is good. You are good too, God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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HELLO SANTIAGO2: Thank you for sharing this important message to us. Like our sun, "Old Faithful," our "Lady Wind," comes and goes. They know that the law of nature is: :What goes around comes around. You have expressed that well here. Good job, Santiago2. This is good. You are good too, God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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rhonnie, thank you so much for your kind comments and review.
Comment from nomi338
The wind comes and goes unbidden. Sometimes calming, cooling and serene; sometimes destructive and seemingly mean. Mortal man cannot control her, though Jesus showed that he could. Since he is no longer on the earth, there is no one here now who's bidding she will obey.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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The wind comes and goes unbidden. Sometimes calming, cooling and serene; sometimes destructive and seemingly mean. Mortal man cannot control her, though Jesus showed that he could. Since he is no longer on the earth, there is no one here now who's bidding she will obey.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thank you, nomi, for reviewing and for your kind words.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
What an impressive personification of this force of Mother Nature! You really made her come to life for me. I could actually feel my skin prickling as I continued to read! My favorite image was "A stand of willows in the haze/Proud trees submit, turn inside out/Deprived of all conceit. What an awesome slant [oh, ha - no pun intended there!] on that movement!
It's obvious why this was awarded a "Recognized" ribbon! Super job, Santiago2. xo
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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What an impressive personification of this force of Mother Nature! You really made her come to life for me. I could actually feel my skin prickling as I continued to read! My favorite image was "A stand of willows in the haze/Proud trees submit, turn inside out/Deprived of all conceit. What an awesome slant [oh, ha - no pun intended there!] on that movement!
It's obvious why this was awarded a "Recognized" ribbon! Super job, Santiago2. xo
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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I'm flattered by this review. Thanks so much, Rachelle, for your comments.
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It's not flattery if it's true, Santiago...and trust me when I tell you this: it's true. xo
Comment from karenina
Very nice. Descriptive original vignettes of wind effects word painted with the skill of an artist whose brush is a pen and whose canvas is the page! --Karenina
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Very nice. Descriptive original vignettes of wind effects word painted with the skill of an artist whose brush is a pen and whose canvas is the page! --Karenina
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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karenina, thanks very much for reviewing. I really appreciate your comment.
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You have that special "it" factor that makes your poem fly!--Karenina
Comment from Liberty Justice
So lovely with wild rolling descriptions of the beauty but destructive nature of a hurricane. How well this photo captures curves and swirls of such a dynamic force of water and wind. WELL DONE. Read Review mine also. lolol liberty justice
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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So lovely with wild rolling descriptions of the beauty but destructive nature of a hurricane. How well this photo captures curves and swirls of such a dynamic force of water and wind. WELL DONE. Read Review mine also. lolol liberty justice
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for your comments. She is a force to be reckoned with.
