The Woodland Marching Band
The animals have a parade.33 total reviews
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
This is very fun and cute. What a great parade that would be to watch. I'm glad they were able to agree on things so the parade could go on. Well done. Rox
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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This is very fun and cute. What a great parade that would be to watch. I'm glad they were able to agree on things so the parade could go on. Well done. Rox
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Thank you. I'm happy you enjoyed reading it.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow a chuckle for this one. Excellently done abab and what a compilation of parade members. Some good and some bad but all giving their all. This was a fun piece
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Wow a chuckle for this one. Excellently done abab and what a compilation of parade members. Some good and some bad but all giving their all. This was a fun piece
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Barb. It was fun to write.
Comment from Ogden
The Woodland Marching Band, huh? The parade must have been lots of fun, with all those animals doing silly things! I'll have to catch the next one. Please notify in advance.
Don
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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The Woodland Marching Band, huh? The parade must have been lots of fun, with all those animals doing silly things! I'll have to catch the next one. Please notify in advance.
Don
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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HAhaha. Okay. Thank you for giving me a chuckle.
Comment from LIJ Red
I keep seeing the cartoons and sketches of Noah loading up for the flood, the lines of animals trooping to the gangway...don't you imagine there was a band to keep the marching in step? Excellent response to the prompt.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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I keep seeing the cartoons and sketches of Noah loading up for the flood, the lines of animals trooping to the gangway...don't you imagine there was a band to keep the marching in step? Excellent response to the prompt.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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I hadn't thought of that. Surely, there was. Thank you, Red.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Woodland Marching Band, is a fun assembly of eager animals who just want to have a good time tooting their horns and marching about (except the weasel, of course).
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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This poem, The Woodland Marching Band, is a fun assembly of eager animals who just want to have a good time tooting their horns and marching about (except the weasel, of course).
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Bill. I think the weasel had the right idea. hahahaha
Comment from bob cullen
This truly is great. It rolls off the tongue with great rhythm and it presents the most wonderful images in the mind. I see this poem bringing pleasure to children, and most adults. Great imagination.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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This truly is great. It rolls off the tongue with great rhythm and it presents the most wonderful images in the mind. I see this poem bringing pleasure to children, and most adults. Great imagination.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Thank you for a great review, and for the love comments.
Comment from Sally Law
How cute is this! I love the art. It looks like you have both the woodland animals and animals native to the African Plains in your parade. No matter, it is still a fine poem and parade with furry friends abounding.
Always my best,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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How cute is this! I love the art. It looks like you have both the woodland animals and animals native to the African Plains in your parade. No matter, it is still a fine poem and parade with furry friends abounding.
Always my best,
Sal xo
Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Sally. I appreciate that.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
That is really a unique work. The idea of the Woodland Band and the furry musicians was really clever. The rhyme and meter was "accurate" as well as entertaining. That was an excellent piece. -Robert-
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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That is really a unique work. The idea of the Woodland Band and the furry musicians was really clever. The rhyme and meter was "accurate" as well as entertaining. That was an excellent piece. -Robert-
Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thank you for a great review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Yvonne, this is a great children's poem about the parade of all the different animals. It's very educative as well. I really liked it. A great entry for the 'Animal Crackers'. Warm regards. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Hi Yvonne, this is a great children's poem about the parade of all the different animals. It's very educative as well. I really liked it. A great entry for the 'Animal Crackers'. Warm regards. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Ulla. I'm glad you like it.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is skillfully-written, creative, exuberant, and delightful.
You have made excellent use of specific details to describe how things
can come together when participants at last decide to work as a unit.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Your poem is skillfully-written, creative, exuberant, and delightful.
You have made excellent use of specific details to describe how things
can come together when participants at last decide to work as a unit.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thank you for this great review.