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"Zoom!" by rhonnie69
Remember Wiley coyote
Unforgettable...HUH?
If you remember Wiley,
Chances are you remember
The roadrunner.
This interesting bird
makes it's home in the
Southwestern states.
It's called a road runner
Because it does more running
Than flying.
It finds its food on the ground.
It likes to eat large insects.
It will also eat lizards, and even snakes.
It builds its nest close to the ground.
Because it can run so quickly
It feels that it is safe to sleep there.
Good news for Wiley.
NOT.
Actually, this bird is called:
The "GREATER," Road Runner.
It has long fast legs to help
It catch its prey...and to escape
From its enemies.
Sometimes it will fly to escape.
But it needs not to fly very far.
Then it lands upon its feet.
Good news for Wiley.
NOT.
Beep Beep Zoom!
Wiley?
"Drat. Foiled again."
It feels at home in desert lands,
and other dry places
All year long.
Now ya' know.
Gotta' go.
See ya'
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Of course I recall
Remember Wiley coyote
Unforgettable...HUH?
and remember Wiley,
Chances are you remember
The roadrunner.
What a fun read
Gert
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"Zoom!" by rhonnie69
Remember Wiley coyote
Unforgettable...HUH?
If you remember Wiley,
Chances are you remember
The roadrunner.
This interesting bird
makes it's home in the
Southwestern states.
It's called a road runner
Because it does more running
Than flying.
It finds its food on the ground.
It likes to eat large insects.
It will also eat lizards, and even snakes.
It builds its nest close to the ground.
Because it can run so quickly
It feels that it is safe to sleep there.
Good news for Wiley.
NOT.
Actually, this bird is called:
The "GREATER," Road Runner.
It has long fast legs to help
It catch its prey...and to escape
From its enemies.
Sometimes it will fly to escape.
But it needs not to fly very far.
Then it lands upon its feet.
Good news for Wiley.
NOT.
Beep Beep Zoom!
Wiley?
"Drat. Foiled again."
It feels at home in desert lands,
and other dry places
All year long.
Now ya' know.
Gotta' go.
See ya'
Beep Beep
ZOOM!
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Of course I recall
Remember Wiley coyote
Unforgettable...HUH?
and remember Wiley,
Chances are you remember
The roadrunner.
What a fun read
Gert
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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HELLO GERT: Hello, dear lady. I haven't heard from you in a while. It's always good to hear from you. It's that I'm always having a problem contacting you on your sight. Just like today. There's a lot of things in your review that I don't understand. Can you explain it to me, please? Thank you. I'm looking forward to hearing from you, my fan-friend. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Hello rhonnie69I see what you mean by not understand my review, either did I. There is one thing I know is that I had loads of fun reading about the roadrunner how he
Sometimes it will fly to escape.
But it needs not to fly very far.
Then it lands upon its feet.
Good news for Wiley.
NOT. Gert
Hello rhonnie69I see what you mean by not understand my review, either did I. There is one thing I know is that I had loads of fun reading about the roadrunner how he
Sometimes it will fly to escape.
But it needs not to fly very far.
Then it lands upon its feet.
Good news for Wiley.
NOT. Gert
Hello rhonnie69I see what you mean by not understand my review, either did I. There is one thing I know is that I had loads of fun reading about the roadrunner how he
Sometimes it will fly to escape.
But it needs not to fly very far.
Then it lands upon its feet.
Good news for Wiley.
NOT. Gert
Hello rhonnie69I see what you mean by not understand my review, either did I. There is one thing I know is that I had loads of fun reading about the roadrunner how he
Sometimes it will fly to escape.
But it needs not to fly very far.
Then it lands upon its feet.
Good news for Wiley.
NOT. Gert
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HELLO GERT: Now you understand me...and I understand you. That's what really matters. God bless you, dear lady. Cordially: rhonnie69,
Comment from Xia Thornwood
What a fun poem! It is rare that I enjoy a piece that uses cartoons, etc., to teach, but this one made me smile and reread it several times. The yellow background was a good choice to compliment the fun atmosphere of the poem.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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What a fun poem! It is rare that I enjoy a piece that uses cartoons, etc., to teach, but this one made me smile and reread it several times. The yellow background was a good choice to compliment the fun atmosphere of the poem.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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HELLO XIA THORNWOOD: Thank you. Your review is appreciated. Glad that you found fun in this reading. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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My pleasure!
