dizzy with love
a 5 7 5 poem4 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I love the simplicity and flair of this one. I can imagine this scene perfectly! Very cool graphic you found to display it - VERY sparkly, indeed! I hope you do well in the 5-7-5 Romance contest. xo
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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I love the simplicity and flair of this one. I can imagine this scene perfectly! Very cool graphic you found to display it - VERY sparkly, indeed! I hope you do well in the 5-7-5 Romance contest. xo
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Yup fair season is coming up. I love the old fashioned fairs in Vermont. My favorite called the Barton fair aka fartin' bear, ha ha. I love the feeling driving home all dizzy and sugar fuelled, kinda like new love, sigh. j
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But less complicated, right?!~
Comment from Bill Schott
This romantic 5-7-5, Dizzy With Love, has the right set up and finds two lovers out and about in the carnival atmosphere of freedom and desires. Nice.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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This romantic 5-7-5, Dizzy With Love, has the right set up and finds two lovers out and about in the carnival atmosphere of freedom and desires. Nice.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Fair season coming up. I love that dizzy, sugar~fuelled giddy feeling after the fair, kinda like new love, haha. Thanks for your always generous reviews, cheers,
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-The imagery is vivid and
creates a good word
picture of the scene.
-Effective use of rhyme, too.
-I like the fun atmosphere
you create in your romantic
day at the fair.
-A good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-The imagery is vivid and
creates a good word
picture of the scene.
-Effective use of rhyme, too.
-I like the fun atmosphere
you create in your romantic
day at the fair.
-A good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thanks for the insightful review Pam. Fair season is coming up and I just love that dizzy, spinning, sugar~fuelled feeling coming home, kinda like new love, hah. Cheers
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You are very welcome. Sounds like a sugar high:)
Comment from kiwisteveh
Your little poem combines the dizziness of love and the dizzy feeling of a fairground ride - a clever pairing. Nice presentation too.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Your little poem combines the dizziness of love and the dizzy feeling of a fairground ride - a clever pairing. Nice presentation too.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thanks for the review Steve. Fair season is coming up. I love that dizzy, off balance, sugar fuelled end of fair day buzz. Feels a bit like love haha. Cheers
