That 'Chromantic' Moment
Romance 5-7-5 Contest Entry11 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
That magic moment when two hearts become one - and all fades to grey. You've captured that moment in this short but meaningful piece. Creative melding of two words makes it unique. Should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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That magic moment when two hearts become one - and all fades to grey. You've captured that moment in this short but meaningful piece. Creative melding of two words makes it unique. Should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much!!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
First of all, even above your message, I loved the presentation. I feel pretty sure I know who the author is -- wink-- And I wish you great luck in the contest -- though using big words like that may set you back with some of our folks. hahahaha
I know -- I'm so rude! Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Dear Mystery Poet,
First of all, even above your message, I loved the presentation. I feel pretty sure I know who the author is -- wink-- And I wish you great luck in the contest -- though using big words like that may set you back with some of our folks. hahahaha
I know -- I'm so rude! Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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LOL! Thank you for the review, ma'am!! ;)
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem reminds us how being with the one you love can blind you to other things around you. Though sometimes it can make be everything for clear and more beautiful.
Congrats on becoming the reviewer of the month.
Keep writing.
~Joan
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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This poem reminds us how being with the one you love can blind you to other things around you. Though sometimes it can make be everything for clear and more beautiful.
Congrats on becoming the reviewer of the month.
Keep writing.
~Joan
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much for dropping in on this one, Joan-- good to hear from you, ma'am!! :)
And thanx for the Congrats.... so wonderful of you to notice the marquee! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
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You are most kindly welcome, Yvette. I like reading the site news.
Joan
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about a walk on the beach early morning before the sun rises the whole scene is chromatic in shades of gray except the yellow clothing of the walkers.
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about a walk on the beach early morning before the sun rises the whole scene is chromatic in shades of gray except the yellow clothing of the walkers.
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you very much!! :)
Comment from Richard J
Wow!
An enthralling presentation, coupled with the imagery it and your words bring to life are sure to win big in the contest.
I believe in instant romance, but as your words, it often fades away all too soon.
Thank you for sharing your very creative and enjoyed piece! ~ Richard : )
Sooo, this is your doing, eh? I might've known â?¦ LOL!
It's beeeautiful! : )
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Wow!
An enthralling presentation, coupled with the imagery it and your words bring to life are sure to win big in the contest.
I believe in instant romance, but as your words, it often fades away all too soon.
Thank you for sharing your very creative and enjoyed piece! ~ Richard : )
Sooo, this is your doing, eh? I might've known â?¦ LOL!
It's beeeautiful! : )
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you so much!! ;)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork,
presentation, and
formatting of poem.
-The syllable count is good.
-The repetition of
the '-s' sound is effective.
-You show the impact
of awareness and a smile
can have in a relationship.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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-Very nice artwork,
presentation, and
formatting of poem.
-The syllable count is good.
-The repetition of
the '-s' sound is effective.
-You show the impact
of awareness and a smile
can have in a relationship.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you so much!!!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Clever title that ties in with the 'fade to grey' in the poem.
I like the suggestion that the burgeoning love between the pair supersedes everything else, even colour.
Interesting word 'trepidatious.' Some dictionaries approve of it, others don't.
This should do well in the contest. Good luck.
Steve
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Clever title that ties in with the 'fade to grey' in the poem.
I like the suggestion that the burgeoning love between the pair supersedes everything else, even colour.
Interesting word 'trepidatious.' Some dictionaries approve of it, others don't.
This should do well in the contest. Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I liked this piece. Excellent choice of words.
The one thing I would say is to maybe rethink the colour scheme. The background yellow makes the final line quite difficult to read as it bleeds into it too much.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Hi there,
I liked this piece. Excellent choice of words.
The one thing I would say is to maybe rethink the colour scheme. The background yellow makes the final line quite difficult to read as it bleeds into it too much.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you!!
Comment from Kamisah Karim
Chromatic moments
To me, it means that the two person involved are not sure of what to expect or will happen. Therefore, their smiles were filled with anxiety. Unsure of the type of emotion to potray. May be they do not really know the true voice that speaks in the heart of the other.
As a result, the actions and emotions depicted by the two are not balanced or in equal.
Did I get it right there? Sweating here, right now.
Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Chromatic moments
To me, it means that the two person involved are not sure of what to expect or will happen. Therefore, their smiles were filled with anxiety. Unsure of the type of emotion to potray. May be they do not really know the true voice that speaks in the heart of the other.
As a result, the actions and emotions depicted by the two are not balanced or in equal.
Did I get it right there? Sweating here, right now.
Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Wonderful! :) Thank you for the review!!
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You mean to say that I was right.
You are most welcome.
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Yes! ;) ;) Take care! ;)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a unique write and fits in with the artwork so perfectly, but also stands alone, togetherness in a sticky situation shows a sense of love and hope, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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This is a unique write and fits in with the artwork so perfectly, but also stands alone, togetherness in a sticky situation shows a sense of love and hope, love Dolly x
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you so much!!
