A Four Letter Word Called Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "How I Love You"A collection of love poems.
4 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This romantic 5-7-5, How I Love You, has the right set up and makes the boundaries of love as proximal as the sound of a heart beating and a gentle, perfumed presence.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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This romantic 5-7-5, How I Love You, has the right set up and makes the boundaries of love as proximal as the sound of a heart beating and a gentle, perfumed presence.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thank you. Your comments are so greatly appreciated!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
This is a super duper entry for the Romantic 5/7/5 contest. I think most of us have felt this way at some time or another. Hopelessly joyful when we're with our beloved and absolutely bereft when they leave our side.
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Dear Mystery Poet,
This is a super duper entry for the Romantic 5/7/5 contest. I think most of us have felt this way at some time or another. Hopelessly joyful when we're with our beloved and absolutely bereft when they leave our side.
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you ever so much! I truly appreciate your encouraging comments!
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Joel, in seventeen syllables, your poem describes the hills and valleys of love. A poem of truth. Well-chosen artwork choice. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Hello Joel, in seventeen syllables, your poem describes the hills and valleys of love. A poem of truth. Well-chosen artwork choice. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you ever so much! I truly appreciate your encouraging comments!
Comment from Bill Pinder
That is a powerful expression of love with this contrast in the emotions that are affected by the changes in everyday life that we all have to endure as part of our conundrum while existing on this planet in the middle of the universe. I was just playing around dictating a run on sentence.
Bill
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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That is a powerful expression of love with this contrast in the emotions that are affected by the changes in everyday life that we all have to endure as part of our conundrum while existing on this planet in the middle of the universe. I was just playing around dictating a run on sentence.
Bill
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Well, thank you ever so much for all the comments!
