Love
Always in love.4 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This romantic 5-7-5, Love, has the right set up and dangles a few strings for the readers to grab on to so as to tug a thread of love for themselves. Nice.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
This romantic 5-7-5, Love, has the right set up and dangles a few strings for the readers to grab on to so as to tug a thread of love for themselves. Nice.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thanks Bill for the five stars.
Comment from Patty Palmer
The poem is simple and sweet. Good luck in the contest!
I also like the picture. Again sweet and simple. Have you been writing for very long? I hate this thing that tells us we don't have enough characters LOL
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
The poem is simple and sweet. Good luck in the contest!
I also like the picture. Again sweet and simple. Have you been writing for very long? I hate this thing that tells us we don't have enough characters LOL
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Pat, I majored in and received my BA degree in Literature. When in high school, I was always glad to see homework involving essays
book reports, etc. I have always loved to write, but the writers in Fanstory have put me to shame. I'm just proud to be a part of it.
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me too!
Comment from Richard J
Aw,
It's a gorgeous presentation, with a promise of forever love.
I really do believe in "love at first sight".
This should do well in the contest ... it's just lovely! ~ Richard : )
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
Aw,
It's a gorgeous presentation, with a promise of forever love.
I really do believe in "love at first sight".
This should do well in the contest ... it's just lovely! ~ Richard : )
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you for your kind review and five stars. Glad you liked it.
Comment from fm wright
This poem says it all. It starts with the beginning and states how long it will last. A truly sentimental poem that flows so well in thought and word. I wish you only the best with this entry!
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
This poem says it all. It starts with the beginning and states how long it will last. A truly sentimental poem that flows so well in thought and word. I wish you only the best with this entry!
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review and five stars. Glad you liked it.