Love's Touch
Poem 5/7/55 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Well done 5-7-5 which really meets the challenge. I like how you show the charge of two people in love and holding hands. Hopefully that excitement lasts a lifetime. Best to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Well done 5-7-5 which really meets the challenge. I like how you show the charge of two people in love and holding hands. Hopefully that excitement lasts a lifetime. Best to you in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Great review zanya
Comment from Bill Schott
This romantic 5-7-5, Love's Touch, has the right set up and sends chills up one's spine as the realization that there is love here shoots to the brain. Nice.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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This romantic 5-7-5, Love's Touch, has the right set up and sends chills up one's spine as the realization that there is love here shoots to the brain. Nice.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Thanks for that lovely review zanya
Comment from Mark D. R.
Oh, I so much favor the 5-7-5 poems. They are my favorites writes and reviews.
I prefer the centered text, as you did, for these short poems. I liked your romantic story and 'frisson' is such an expressive word for your three lines. IMHO you don't need to capitalize your 'starry.'
Methinks your entry will get many votes in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Oh, I so much favor the 5-7-5 poems. They are my favorites writes and reviews.
I prefer the centered text, as you did, for these short poems. I liked your romantic story and 'frisson' is such an expressive word for your three lines. IMHO you don't need to capitalize your 'starry.'
Methinks your entry will get many votes in the contest.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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What an encouraging review -! much appreciated zanya
Comment from Richard J
Cute and sweet, young romance with pinky promises ... what could be better?
Here's hoping you do well in the contest.
I just love a good love poem! ~ Richard : )
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Cute and sweet, young romance with pinky promises ... what could be better?
Here's hoping you do well in the contest.
I just love a good love poem! ~ Richard : )
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Such a cute phrase 'pinky promises'- thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from Sandra Montanino
Well, today I learned a new vocabulary word. It's "frisson." A sudden feeling of excitement or fear. So that really describes love. It's excitement and fear of losing these precious moments. Good Job!!
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Well, today I learned a new vocabulary word. It's "frisson." A sudden feeling of excitement or fear. So that really describes love. It's excitement and fear of losing these precious moments. Good Job!!
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Great - I just love when I learn a new word too! it's the stuff of our wordsmith trade, I guess ! zanya
