Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

That's true. The sun dappling through the trees does appear to be a mosaic. Nicely worded and illustrated. Much luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn

 Comment Written 31-May-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019

Thanks for your read and the comment.

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

Your poem captures the fragmented beauty of sun-dappled light through branches that replicates the look of a colourful mosaic. Very nicely portrayed.

 Comment Written 30-May-2019

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reply by the author on 30-May-2019

Thanks for your read and comments. Believe it or not I thought about using dappled.

reply by LisaMay on 30-May-2019

I do believe it. Similar brain to name that detail.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You brought the scene to my eyes here and I was squinting at the sight of the sun's magical beaming, I wish you luck with this uplifting poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-May-2019

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reply by the author on 30-May-2019

Thanks for your read. Your comments always appreciated.