Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Wow, now this is quite the sensual poem. I have more reviewing to do or I would take this one to dreamland with me! (*smile*) This is a beautiful presentation too (as always)! Best of luck, my friend.

 Comment Written 30-May-2019

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reply by the author on 30-May-2019

Ahhh... but I do hope you took it with you anyway!! ;) ;) Thanx for stopping in and enjoying a touch of sensual ... :) ;) ;) Yvette

Comment from royowen

Excellent

What a wonderful 5/7/5 poetic entry in this contest, what a super piece of artwork this is Yvette, an excellent narrative with superior expression of phrase, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 30-May-2019

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reply by the author on 30-May-2019

Thank you, Roy, for your review -- appreciate your thoughts on this fun one! ;) ;) Yvette

reply by royowen on 30-May-2019

Well done

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Get it on girl! Get it on!!! I for one can't wait to get into all of your fantastical! I love the way the blist'ring flame 'softly' brands... can such a thing happen??? that's a fantasy for sure!

 Comment Written 30-May-2019

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reply by the author on 30-May-2019

Of course it can...anything can happen when I write it!! ;) ;) Thanx for the review and be ready for the company to go home and for me to be able to actually breathe for a while next week -- LOL! ;) :) Yvette

Comment from tbacha58

Exceptional

I have been away for a whie yet your picture with your phrase made me realize how much i have been missing seeing and reading your beautiful poems. Terry

 Comment Written 30-May-2019

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reply by the author on 30-May-2019

Oh, Terry, you are such a sweet-talker... LOL! :) That aside, however, it is so very good to see your face -- you have been missed!! :) ;) Thank you for these wonderful stars, ma'am -- I'm so glad this offering was here to welcome you back! :) :) Yvette

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

The summer sun here touching the skin and softly turning us brown? A flame we haven't seen here for a few days Yvette. Those soft feathers caress and sometimes blister, but always welcome, I felt the heat there, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-May-2019

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reply by the author on 30-May-2019

Thanx for your thoughtful review, Dolly -- take care over there! ;) Yvette

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have made excellent use of all your syllables and the amazing, fantastical artwork. This perfect pair creates an intriguing, imaginative scenario.

 Comment Written 29-May-2019

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reply by the author on 30-May-2019

Thanx for your thoughtful review, Janice -- always good to hear from you! ;) Yvette

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

This is a hot one Yvette!

Your words, colors, and illustration combine into one burning good post.

I am only sad that your f-letter alliteration line ending could not carry to your last line. 'Feet' (or 'foreskin' with the extra syllable!) would work but not with your good verse. LOL

Mark

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 Comment Written 29-May-2019

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reply by the author on 30-May-2019

Thanx for the review, Mark -- much appreciated! ;)

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That picture belongs on the cover of some of those old style sci-fi books (the kind that the guys bought!) lol. The poem is a sensual take on the picture.
Question:
"each alight with bist'ring flame" (did you mean "blist'ring?")

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 Comment Written 29-May-2019

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reply by the author on 29-May-2019

Thank you!! Funny how you can read things so many times and you just don't catch little things like that... your brain knows what's "supposed" to be there so, that's what it sees!! ;) :) Fixed now -- thanx for having my back!! ;) ;) Yvette