Firebird's Passage
Was it truly a dream...?28 total reviews
Comment from Richard J
The epitome of sensually vivid heated words, in increasingly fiery detail, certainly sears my manly imagination, and that picture does little to cool it down ... whew!
Yvette,
This is one of the most visually inviting, enthrallingly 'rousing pieces I've had the pleasure to enjoy in a long time.
Thank you most gratefully for the moment!
Now, to turn the fan up! ~ Richard ; )
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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The epitome of sensually vivid heated words, in increasingly fiery detail, certainly sears my manly imagination, and that picture does little to cool it down ... whew!
Yvette,
This is one of the most visually inviting, enthrallingly 'rousing pieces I've had the pleasure to enjoy in a long time.
Thank you most gratefully for the moment!
Now, to turn the fan up! ~ Richard ; )
Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this one, Sir Richard -- I really am so very ready to get back into some real fantasy writing ... and that's GONNA happen tomorrow! :) That's one of those 'come hell or highwater' vow things (lol!) because I am absolutely determined to get caught up today!! ;) :) Hope that fan helped... LOL! ;);) Yvette
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Firebird's Passage", is short, succinct and deftly descriptive. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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"Firebird's Passage", is short, succinct and deftly descriptive. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thanx, Dutchess, for this wonderful review... I am so VERY ready for summertime....just making it through this last graduation this morning! ;) ;) Take care! :) Yvette ;)
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Firebird's Passage, has the correct format and puts the 'heated hawk' in the catbird seat as some hot, feather-dusting fills the dream world with egg-citement.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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This 5-7-5, Firebird's Passage, has the correct format and puts the 'heated hawk' in the catbird seat as some hot, feather-dusting fills the dream world with egg-citement.
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thanx, Sir Bill, for this wonderful review... I am so VERY ready for summertime....just making it through this last graduation this morning! ;) ;) Take care! :) Yvette ;)
Comment from Dean Kuch
Like a determined fiery Phoenix rising up from the ashes sometimes we need others to light a fire beneath our butts and get us moving once again.
It does us no good to wallow in self-pity.
Get up, get out, rise up, and FIGHT!
Excellent entry in the 5-7-5 poetry contest, Yvette.
Good luck to you!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Like a determined fiery Phoenix rising up from the ashes sometimes we need others to light a fire beneath our butts and get us moving once again.
It does us no good to wallow in self-pity.
Get up, get out, rise up, and FIGHT!
Excellent entry in the 5-7-5 poetry contest, Yvette.
Good luck to you!
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Wow, Dean -- you always manage to find the coolest inserts to your writings and responses -- thank you for this cool firebird!! ;) ;) And thank you for the wonderful review... I am SO VERY ready for summer... company's leaving today (youngest's grad was yesterday!) and I can, maybe, relax a bit!! :) ;) Have a great Sunday, sir, and take care this week! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Stephen Force
Ouch! That's hot; this is the excellence I have come to expect. The verse, the image, the presentation, all tight and harmonious, A tad bit risque for my tender years,(i'm older than dirt:-)) but great job! Good luck.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Ouch! That's hot; this is the excellence I have come to expect. The verse, the image, the presentation, all tight and harmonious, A tad bit risque for my tender years,(i'm older than dirt:-)) but great job! Good luck.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Hey, hey -- so glad you enjoyed, sir!! :) ;) Yeah, I'm pretty sure dirt doesn't have a 'risque meter' so, you'll just have to suck it up -- LOL! LOL! :) ;) ;) And I apologize for being a bit behind on my responses.... youngest graduated yesterday and company will all be going home today... and Summer starts tomorrow...HOORAY! :) ;) Means it's time for the imagination to get in full gear again -- I've been itchin' for a few days, now, but been having to 'entertain' company and such... but the house is ours again this evening! :) Thanx for these lovely stars, sir and enjoy a relaxing Sunday! :) ;) Yvette
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Have a great summer, I look forward to more of Renaissance...
Comment from poetwatch
The blond babe with feathers blistering hot, ready to start living again. Yvette, spread your wings and fulfill that dream. ;) I guess school's out. Time to toilet paper the place. This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 poetry Contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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The blond babe with feathers blistering hot, ready to start living again. Yvette, spread your wings and fulfill that dream. ;) I guess school's out. Time to toilet paper the place. This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 poetry Contest.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Oh, yeah, school's out and my youngest's (and last of the season!) graduation was yesterday....company leaves today and tomorrow is officially SUMMER at my house!! :) ;) So glad you enjoyed this one... and I'm pretty sure dreams won't be fulfillled (wishful thinking always nice!) but I will certainly be getting my imagination back in full gear! ;) ;) Thank you so very much for the lovely stars, sir and you have a relaxing Sunday over there! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Colin John
Hi Yvette, now this is one fantastic picture and the poem with its colors are fantastic, good luck with the board and hope they look kindly on this work of Art. Kind regards Colin x
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Hi Yvette, now this is one fantastic picture and the poem with its colors are fantastic, good luck with the board and hope they look kindly on this work of Art. Kind regards Colin x
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Wow, Colin -- THANK YOU!! :) So glad you enjoyed my first steps into my relaxing summer fantasy time!! :) ;) You know the crazy blonde over here loves her imaginary worlds! ;) ;) Take care and have a relaxing Sunday, sir! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sally Law
Wow, you really are heating us up here, blonde girl. I thought the pages of FanStory were going to ignite! Enjoy your summer tan and good reads. This is a fine entry in a class in which you seem to always win the prize.
Always my best and in the contest,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Wow, you really are heating us up here, blonde girl. I thought the pages of FanStory were going to ignite! Enjoy your summer tan and good reads. This is a fine entry in a class in which you seem to always win the prize.
Always my best and in the contest,
Sal xo
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thanx, Lady Sal, for this wonderful review... I am so VERY ready for summertime....just making it through this last graduation this morning! ;) ;) Take care! :) Yvette ;)
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, another stunning write by this gifted and prolifically innovative wordsmith - a delight to read, as always - smoothly rendered in this writer's unique style and descriptive acumen - fully compliant with the prompt, as this writer is aware, with my good luck wish in the contest...
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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In my opinion, another stunning write by this gifted and prolifically innovative wordsmith - a delight to read, as always - smoothly rendered in this writer's unique style and descriptive acumen - fully compliant with the prompt, as this writer is aware, with my good luck wish in the contest...
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thanx, Eve, for this wonderful review... I am so VERY ready for summertime....just making it through this last graduation this morning! ;) ;) Take care! :) Yvette ;)
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You are so welcome, Yvette, my pleasure, and I extend my congratulations for the graduations - great job to all...Eve
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the firebird that brings his thousands of feathers to softly brand your skin with lights of blistring flames like in a dream.
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the firebird that brings his thousands of feathers to softly brand your skin with lights of blistring flames like in a dream.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Crazy blonde dreams!! ;) ;) Thanx for stopping in on this one, Sandra -- gotta go 'out there' sometimes, ya know! ;);) Take care over there!;) Yvette
