A Matter of Perspective
An Entry for the 15-syllable Poem Contest12 total reviews
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
This is really beautiful. Who doesn't love blowing the seeds from a dandelion clock?! (apart from the grumbling gardeners among us)
I enjoy your homonymising! The presentation is perfect :)
Good luck in the voting booth.
Kind regards, Debra :)
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Hello :)
This is really beautiful. Who doesn't love blowing the seeds from a dandelion clock?! (apart from the grumbling gardeners among us)
I enjoy your homonymising! The presentation is perfect :)
Good luck in the voting booth.
Kind regards, Debra :)
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you so much!! :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifteen - syllable poem, A Matter of Perspective, presented in two lines and nine words, reveals that the dandelion must go to seed and catch the wind to be successful.
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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This fifteen - syllable poem, A Matter of Perspective, presented in two lines and nine words, reveals that the dandelion must go to seed and catch the wind to be successful.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you for the review this evening!!
Comment from Gail Denham
This is very good - insightful. It is why dandelions exist - to be blown into more dandelions. And how kids love to find a large one with lots of fluff to spread around.
Good poem
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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This is very good - insightful. It is why dandelions exist - to be blown into more dandelions. And how kids love to find a large one with lots of fluff to spread around.
Good poem
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you!!!
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, such a charming poem, both in word and delivery, including an image choice that smoothly complements the write - fully compliant with the prompt - best wishes in the contest...
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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In my opinion, such a charming poem, both in word and delivery, including an image choice that smoothly complements the write - fully compliant with the prompt - best wishes in the contest...
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thank you for this wonderful review, Eve -- I hope this finds you enjoying the weekend, ma'am! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
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You are very welcome, Yvette. I am and hope you are as well...Eve
Comment from Patty Palmer
Oh, how sweet this is! But, at least we have found a reason for dandelions! Nothing is better than a 3 year old presenting you with a bouquet of them. And the look of wonderment when you show them how to blow the "whiskers" off the stems,
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Oh, how sweet this is! But, at least we have found a reason for dandelions! Nothing is better than a 3 year old presenting you with a bouquet of them. And the look of wonderment when you show them how to blow the "whiskers" off the stems,
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you -- so glad you 'got' me!!
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you're welcome!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fifteen syllable poem about the purpose of the dandelion is to let the seeds spread as far as we can by blowing them into the winds where they can find a place to grow once more.
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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A very well-written fifteen syllable poem about the purpose of the dandelion is to let the seeds spread as far as we can by blowing them into the winds where they can find a place to grow once more.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you!!
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Mystery writer - I love this! If only I thought of it.
An excellent entry for the 15 syllables writing contest.
A perfect use of limited words and what a beautiful picture it paints.
I cannot help but shower you - whoever you are - with a six :-)
Bravo ~DD
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Mystery writer - I love this! If only I thought of it.
An excellent entry for the 15 syllables writing contest.
A perfect use of limited words and what a beautiful picture it paints.
I cannot help but shower you - whoever you are - with a six :-)
Bravo ~DD
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Wow, DD -- you have just made the rest of my week, ma'am!! :) ;) Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments and for these lovely stars! ;) Take good care out there! :)
Comment from LisaMay
I like this... the transience of a dandelion transformed into seed-spreading and therefore continuity through a puff of air. I like how you have given it a soul, personifying it so we can relate the plant to the human world.
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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I like this... the transience of a dandelion transformed into seed-spreading and therefore continuity through a puff of air. I like how you have given it a soul, personifying it so we can relate the plant to the human world.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you for your review!!
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Good 15 syllable count. A very cute and complimentary photo artwork. Great message of the flower's sole purpose. I recall blowing dandelions as a young boy. Fun times.
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Good 15 syllable count. A very cute and complimentary photo artwork. Great message of the flower's sole purpose. I recall blowing dandelions as a young boy. Fun times.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you for your review!!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
When the purpose is clear and action is committed to the purpose, the result is evidently good at purpose; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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When the purpose is clear and action is committed to the purpose, the result is evidently good at purpose; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you for your review!!
