Chip's Poetry
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Comment from Aussie
Great contest entry and I wish you good luck. The illustration complimented your poem. I liked it because it gives the reader insight into how we manage to bring a poem together. Well done.
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Great contest entry and I wish you good luck. The illustration complimented your poem. I liked it because it gives the reader insight into how we manage to bring a poem together. Well done.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you, Aussie!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Indeed! A poem can say so many things through the use of metaphors and allegory. It's what makes poetry so unique and interesting. It is like some sort of mental telepathy, at times. Reading a word that means one thing but knowing its deliberate other meaning. Right? You seem to have hit the nail on the head.
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Indeed! A poem can say so many things through the use of metaphors and allegory. It's what makes poetry so unique and interesting. It is like some sort of mental telepathy, at times. Reading a word that means one thing but knowing its deliberate other meaning. Right? You seem to have hit the nail on the head.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you, Raffaelina!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I really like this. What an excellent message that you've conveyed with just 15 syllables. This is a clever and very well thought out way to describe poems. I like everything about this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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I really like this. What an excellent message that you've conveyed with just 15 syllables. This is a clever and very well thought out way to describe poems. I like everything about this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thanks, Jeffrey!
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Excellent fifteen syllable entry. Very understandable in three short lines.
Not just words buy with meaning. no way this can be improved upon.
Excellent contest entry
t limes
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Excellent fifteen syllable entry. Very understandable in three short lines.
Not just words buy with meaning. no way this can be improved upon.
Excellent contest entry
t limes
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you, Willie.
Comment from Beri Bee
I really like your concept, naturally, and the lines work as real lines, rather than just chopped to meet the syllables, so that is a very fine accomplishment! This is a true poem and a lovely one!
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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I really like your concept, naturally, and the lines work as real lines, rather than just chopped to meet the syllables, so that is a very fine accomplishment! This is a true poem and a lovely one!
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Many thanks, Beri!
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author, these are 15 exquisite little syllables! I wish I had a 6 for you, I really love that you see into the words of the poem into the soul of the poem the way you can see inside the light into its rainbow world. :)
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Hello Author, these are 15 exquisite little syllables! I wish I had a 6 for you, I really love that you see into the words of the poem into the soul of the poem the way you can see inside the light into its rainbow world. :)
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thanks, Susan!
Comment from karenina
It seems counterintuitive that fifteen little syllables could even approach something meaningful... WRONG! You touch my heart with your observation of what poems are, why they are beloved, how they move us...
Brevity does not mean shallow, clearly! The depth here is profound!--Karenina
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It seems counterintuitive that fifteen little syllables could even approach something meaningful... WRONG! You touch my heart with your observation of what poems are, why they are beloved, how they move us...
Brevity does not mean shallow, clearly! The depth here is profound!--Karenina
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thanks so much, Karenina!
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You are oh so welcome mystery poet!--Karenina
Comment from fm wright
So very true. I believe that a well written poem can say different things to different people. This was stated in a most wonderful way, for you have summed it up beautifully in just a few words. I wish you only the best with this entry!
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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So very true. I believe that a well written poem can say different things to different people. This was stated in a most wonderful way, for you have summed it up beautifully in just a few words. I wish you only the best with this entry!
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thanks, FM!
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You're most welcome, contestant!
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifteen - syllable poem, Beyond the Words, presented in three lines and eleven words, reminds us that what is written forms a key to many locks and a mirror to several reflections.
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This fifteen - syllable poem, Beyond the Words, presented in three lines and eleven words, reminds us that what is written forms a key to many locks and a mirror to several reflections.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thanks, Bill.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fifteen syllable poem about the words in poems that need to be ssen beyond what is presented to the reader. Not everyone can see beyond the words that are written.
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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A very well-written fifteen syllable poem about the words in poems that need to be ssen beyond what is presented to the reader. Not everyone can see beyond the words that are written.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you.
