Revive my Artistry
2-4-4-12 Contest Entry15 total reviews
Comment from LyndaS
You've done a beautiful job with this challenge. How clearly you describe the drought all of us find ourselves stranded in from time to time. This plea to your muse to return to you far and away rises above the words "writers block". A poignant and thought provoking entry. Very well done with a powerful presentation. Good luck in the vote. Lynda
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You've done a beautiful job with this challenge. How clearly you describe the drought all of us find ourselves stranded in from time to time. This plea to your muse to return to you far and away rises above the words "writers block". A poignant and thought provoking entry. Very well done with a powerful presentation. Good luck in the vote. Lynda
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Wow, thank you so much for the excellent review and the big sixer, Lynda. Your gracious stars and good luck wishes are greatly appreciated. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Have a great day. Thank you again.
Comment from Earl Corp
You met the required number of syllables in the prompt. Your words actually made sense, which most 12 syllable poems do not. Good luck in the contest.
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You met the required number of syllables in the prompt. Your words actually made sense, which most 12 syllable poems do not. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review, Earl. I'm glad you liked this short piece.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You wish to revive your artistry, you never forget your previous muse, poetry takes the muse and makes its own way with a new composition; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
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You wish to revive your artistry, you never forget your previous muse, poetry takes the muse and makes its own way with a new composition; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review Dr. Al. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I enjoyed how you utilised the form.
The enjambment between lines 2 and 3 is really effective.
Most readers will find your poem relatable - I know I do!
Nice presentation also...
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
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reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Hello :)
I enjoyed how you utilised the form.
The enjambment between lines 2 and 3 is really effective.
Most readers will find your poem relatable - I know I do!
Nice presentation also...
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Debra. I dearly appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from LisaMay
I can relate to this. The power of connecting with a creative muse can overcome all feelings of barrenness, of drought and despair. Greener pastures await to be expressed.
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I can relate to this. The power of connecting with a creative muse can overcome all feelings of barrenness, of drought and despair. Greener pastures await to be expressed.
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Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Yes they do. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Lisa. I'm glad you liked the piece.
