Revive my Artistry
2-4-4-12 Contest Entry15 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This four-line poem, Revive My Artistry, presented in 2-4-4-12 syllable format, asks for inspiration to produce the words thay need to be read. Go to it.
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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This four-line poem, Revive My Artistry, presented in 2-4-4-12 syllable format, asks for inspiration to produce the words thay need to be read. Go to it.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Bill.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is good and well thought out. We do need the writers that continue to amuse, challenge us, and who cause us to pause and think about things. The artwork is spot on and compliments your work well. Great job and well done!
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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This is good and well thought out. We do need the writers that continue to amuse, challenge us, and who cause us to pause and think about things. The artwork is spot on and compliments your work well. Great job and well done!
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Jeffrey. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from MissMerri
I think this is an amazing short poem, the kind I don't seem to know how to write but so often admire. You have used elegant language to convey a universal truth in a way that is sure to grab the heart of any poet. I loved everything about this. The illustration is perfect too. Good luck in the contest. I think this one is sure to do well.
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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I think this is an amazing short poem, the kind I don't seem to know how to write but so often admire. You have used elegant language to convey a universal truth in a way that is sure to grab the heart of any poet. I loved everything about this. The illustration is perfect too. Good luck in the contest. I think this one is sure to do well.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Wow, thank you so much for the fantastic review and the giant sixer, Adonna. I just had to use this picture when I came across it while searching for right one. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful weekend. Thank you again.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ah, the loss of one's muse, even if only temporary, is sad indeed, and you have expressed it so poetically, I'm sure your muse is right there. (*smile*) Bet of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Ah, the loss of one's muse, even if only temporary, is sad indeed, and you have expressed it so poetically, I'm sure your muse is right there. (*smile*) Bet of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Dawn. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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You're very welcome. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed these words and all writers hope not to be deserted by ideas and words to form their art and take away the barren lands and make them fertile again, I enjoyed the sentiments where, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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I enjoyed these words and all writers hope not to be deserted by ideas and words to form their art and take away the barren lands and make them fertile again, I enjoyed the sentiments where, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Dolly. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Richard J
Poetry certainly does fill a lot of missing pieces in life.
In an absolutely gorgeous display of illustration, font choice, and words of true inspiration and beauty.
I'm thinking this one might just win ... in fact, I'm almost sure of it. : )
Thanks for sharing! ~ Richard
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Poetry certainly does fill a lot of missing pieces in life.
In an absolutely gorgeous display of illustration, font choice, and words of true inspiration and beauty.
I'm thinking this one might just win ... in fact, I'm almost sure of it. : )
Thanks for sharing! ~ Richard
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Richard. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this short piece.
Comment from karenina
When I read the contest rules I couldn't picture how it would work...now, look at you! You've shown me that this form can be lovely, even with a seemingly bottom heavy syllable count! Your image is lovely as well. Nice write!--Karenina
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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When I read the contest rules I couldn't picture how it would work...now, look at you! You've shown me that this form can be lovely, even with a seemingly bottom heavy syllable count! Your image is lovely as well. Nice write!--Karenina
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review, Karenina. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great weekend.
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Thank YOU for opening my mind to another poetry form! Of all I read yours really elevated the form and made it work beautifully!--Karenina
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-4-12 poem about our Muse that sometimes take an absence of leave and then we have no idea how to get out of the barren land without him around.
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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A very well-written 2-4-4-12 poem about our Muse that sometimes take an absence of leave and then we have no idea how to get out of the barren land without him around.
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Sandra. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from humpwhistle
I speak only for myself, but this thing called a muse seems only a crutch to me. Writing is a craft, not something magical.
Did a muse paint the Sistine Chapel? Did a muse write The Highway Man? Did a muse sculpt The Kiss?
Sorry. I'm just weary of the muse.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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I speak only for myself, but this thing called a muse seems only a crutch to me. Writing is a craft, not something magical.
Did a muse paint the Sistine Chapel? Did a muse write The Highway Man? Did a muse sculpt The Kiss?
Sorry. I'm just weary of the muse.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Lol, yeah, there's nothing such as a muse. It's all just manipulating words. It's not even a craft rather than twisting the same words into different crap we've already read a million times over. I have no muse. I just like winning these contests once in a while and some people on here actually believe in such a thing. So I adhere to their false dreams and write what they want to hear. Today it was about a dying muse. Lol. Thank you for the great review, Lee.
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Ah, I'm relieved to know you're a pagan like me! L
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 2-4-4-12 poem and entry for the contest
with a splendid presentation of art work and poem.
Excellent imagery in the last line.
Very well done
Best wishes in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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You've written an excellent 2-4-4-12 poem and entry for the contest
with a splendid presentation of art work and poem.
Excellent imagery in the last line.
Very well done
Best wishes in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, Robert. I'm glad you liked the piece.
