Into Eternity...
Offering for the 2-4-4-12 Poetry Contest13 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This four-line poem, Into Eternity, presented in 2-4-4-12 syllable format, finds the souls seeking grace for what has brought them to their knees. Good message.
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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This four-line poem, Into Eternity, presented in 2-4-4-12 syllable format, finds the souls seeking grace for what has brought them to their knees. Good message.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thanx for the review, Bill. ;)
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This makes an excellent point. With what has gone before, is so true, and a lot of folks don't 'get' that idea. Seeking peace is whatever one wants to find. Not some preconceived notion ascribed by others. I love the abstract image you chose. It suits the poem very well, showing the eye of the soul looking out onto what may come to pass for each of us. Well written and an important point, made with grace and dignity.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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This makes an excellent point. With what has gone before, is so true, and a lot of folks don't 'get' that idea. Seeking peace is whatever one wants to find. Not some preconceived notion ascribed by others. I love the abstract image you chose. It suits the poem very well, showing the eye of the soul looking out onto what may come to pass for each of us. Well written and an important point, made with grace and dignity.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thanx so much for your review on this one, Jesse -- and I apologize for being a bit behind on my responses.... youngest graduated yesterday and company will all be going home today... and Summer starts tomorrow...HOORAY! :) ;) So glad you enjoyed this 'introspective' one.. :) Take care up there, sir! ;) ;) Yvette
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You are so welcome! I like your introspection pieces. You, my friend, are a deep thinker!
Take care down there, Jesse
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like the inspirational and thought provoking nature of this. I like the line "fallen but not broken." I can think of some scriptures that speak to this very fact. I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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I like the inspirational and thought provoking nature of this. I like the line "fallen but not broken." I can think of some scriptures that speak to this very fact. I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you!!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Poet!
Oh my goodness!
What an exquisite offering that begs the reader to pause and contemplate.
Profound and creative!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Hello Mystery Poet!
Oh my goodness!
What an exquisite offering that begs the reader to pause and contemplate.
Profound and creative!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Thanx, Lady Diane -- so glad you enjoyed this one...it was a bit of a different one, yeah? :) ;) Thank you for the review and you take care! ;)
Comment from Richard J
Beautiful presentation, and who could resist such a title as "Into Eternity"?
I can tell you for certain that if I'm seeking peace, it definitely is from all I've left in my wake.
This isa marvelous piece ... I love the blending of font colors flowing down the page.
You are very skilled; I hope this one wins ... thanks for sharing! ~ Richard : )
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Beautiful presentation, and who could resist such a title as "Into Eternity"?
I can tell you for certain that if I'm seeking peace, it definitely is from all I've left in my wake.
This isa marvelous piece ... I love the blending of font colors flowing down the page.
You are very skilled; I hope this one wins ... thanks for sharing! ~ Richard : )
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, Sir Richard -- those stars are such a wonderful honor!! :) :) Thank you for the outstanding review and your encouraging comments! ;) Be sure to have a great evening! ;) ;)
Comment from June Sargent
What a profound statement made in a few short lines! We are the sum total of our experiences. And we may need a little glue to hold us together after a fall. But scars can have a beauty of their own. Great sentiments expressed creatively.
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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What a profound statement made in a few short lines! We are the sum total of our experiences. And we may need a little glue to hold us together after a fall. But scars can have a beauty of their own. Great sentiments expressed creatively.
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, June -- thank you for the review and the wonderful comments! ;)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about eternal life that we seek every day of our lives. The peace we can find only when we have faith in God and know He will provide everything we need.
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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A very well-written poem about eternal life that we seek every day of our lives. The peace we can find only when we have faith in God and know He will provide everything we need.
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review, Sandra -- much appreciated! ;)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a poignant right as our memories serve to haunt us at times and we seek peace from them as forgetting is not easy, a cleverly written piece, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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This is a poignant right as our memories serve to haunt us at times and we seek peace from them as forgetting is not easy, a cleverly written piece, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Thank you!!!
Comment from C T Curtis
I like the picture accompanying this well-written, very meaningful poem and it is easy to understand. I think it is very well-done. Hmm - I wonder "come before" or "gone before" within the last phrase.
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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I like the picture accompanying this well-written, very meaningful poem and it is easy to understand. I think it is very well-done. Hmm - I wonder "come before" or "gone before" within the last phrase.
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from way2gokevs
A very worthy entry to the contest, M8......... Meaningful words spell out what the poem is intending to portray. Best of luck.
Query, as many have pointed out to me on this site............ is punctuation necessary when you have line breaks..... Many say , not.
Have a great day, cheers, Kev.
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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A very worthy entry to the contest, M8......... Meaningful words spell out what the poem is intending to portray. Best of luck.
Query, as many have pointed out to me on this site............ is punctuation necessary when you have line breaks..... Many say , not.
Have a great day, cheers, Kev.
Comment Written 28-May-2019
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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Thank you!!!
