Comment from Randa Dayle

Excellent

I really enjoyed your 2-4-4-12 poem. What a fun contest. Good luck with your entry. It has a great message. I really enjoy poems that teach something.

 Comment Written 28-May-2019

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reply by the author on 28-May-2019

Thank you!!!

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good image, presentation,
and formatting of your poem.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like the imagery and
message in your poem.
-I think our souls do
need peace, and I like
how you link that to
things in the past.
-Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 28-May-2019

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reply by the author on 28-May-2019

Thank you!!!

reply by Pam (respa) on 29-May-2019

You are welcome.

Comment from rspoet

Good

You've written an excellent 2-4-4-12 poem for the contest
The key is "not broken," leaving room to rise
and find peace with the past.
Great choice of art work
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert

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 Comment Written 28-May-2019

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reply by the author on 28-May-2019

Thank you!!!