Fairy Fun and Leprechaun Folly
Quatrains and more of magical garden mischief...17 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
As always, I seem to be apologizing for missing one of your fine works. I'm not really sure how I missed this, but I did. This is a lovely both in visual appeal and execution. I can see why it won the contest--it's enchanting! Your rhyme was spot on, which made this so enjoyable to read.
Always my best to you and yours,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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As always, I seem to be apologizing for missing one of your fine works. I'm not really sure how I missed this, but I did. This is a lovely both in visual appeal and execution. I can see why it won the contest--it's enchanting! Your rhyme was spot on, which made this so enjoyable to read.
Always my best to you and yours,
Sally xo
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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OH, no apologies, Lady Sal -- was another silly contest.... they are good for the breaks without big 'pressure' of everybody knowing what you're up to ... LOL! ;) :) Feel like a little kid sneaking around.. :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from djsaxon
Delightful. Your magic resonates throughout the entire write. I love good acrostics, and this just happens to be a great one. We get a terrific sense of the hushed observer careful not to disturb the shenanigans going on in the ward. Excellent pen - DJ
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Delightful. Your magic resonates throughout the entire write. I love good acrostics, and this just happens to be a great one. We get a terrific sense of the hushed observer careful not to disturb the shenanigans going on in the ward. Excellent pen - DJ
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Oh, DJ -- thanx so much for weighing in on this one... it was my first 'long one' after the last grades were in for the year.... Summer starts this coming Monday after the graduation 'company' goes home - LOL! ;) :) Take care! ;) Yvette :)
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An easy weigh in. Enjoy your company-free Summer. We have just wheeled into Winter in OZ. DJ
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Of course I could wait till Saturday to decorate with a 6 but I'm so excited to be back able to read, write and communicate effectively that I had to give the Virtual Six. And you win with it woo whoo! Now I didn't realize how bees were considered a problem. I love the bees, so tell the fairies to send the bees my way!!! I love where you got the photo from as well! Beautiful and could be put into a small children's flip book!!! An awesome acrostic!! Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Of course I could wait till Saturday to decorate with a 6 but I'm so excited to be back able to read, write and communicate effectively that I had to give the Virtual Six. And you win with it woo whoo! Now I didn't realize how bees were considered a problem. I love the bees, so tell the fairies to send the bees my way!!! I love where you got the photo from as well! Beautiful and could be put into a small children's flip book!!! An awesome acrostic!! Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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That bee thing is a personal projection... LOL! ;) ;) But I'll certainly pass the word along! ;) Hope you're slowly but surely finding some 'regularity' ... hate the recovery period, but, man, it feels good when it's finally done! :) Keep gettin' better!! ;) :) Take care! Yvette
Comment from Badger_29
Stunning acrostic poetry very well written and it really helped that you included the notice said we need is pronounced with two syllables.
Unmatched chaos bee-gins its dance!
Now sprites and bees create a blur,
Clever. Your style and the class it's fascinating. You have a knack for writing in a very interesting way that tells a tale and weaves a story. I'm not usually attracted to this fantasy stuff but I found this one fascinating and intriguing.
Blessings,
Darren
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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Stunning acrostic poetry very well written and it really helped that you included the notice said we need is pronounced with two syllables.
Unmatched chaos bee-gins its dance!
Now sprites and bees create a blur,
Clever. Your style and the class it's fascinating. You have a knack for writing in a very interesting way that tells a tale and weaves a story. I'm not usually attracted to this fantasy stuff but I found this one fascinating and intriguing.
Blessings,
Darren
Comment Written 28-May-2019
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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Oh my goodness, Darren - I just opened my browser and just WOW! :) I am so very grateful to you for your wonderful comments and for the honor of these stars ... so glad I could hold your interest in my crazy-blonde fantasy world!! I'm happy to welcome you to my special place of imagination...!! Thank you again, sir, and have a wonderful week full of magical garden laughter! :)
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Magic Merges Mysteriously
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely Acrostic about the fun going on in the garden with the fairies and the leprechaun. unmatched chaos bee-gins its dance - great line and a fun read.
cheers.
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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A lovely Acrostic about the fun going on in the garden with the fairies and the leprechaun. unmatched chaos bee-gins its dance - great line and a fun read.
cheers.
Comment Written 28-May-2019
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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Many thanks for your review, Pearl -- may you find laughter in life's magical garden today!
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Mystery Author, A delighful read and a nice acrostic for the contest. You bring the fairies alive in your story and presentstion also matched the words a touch of ryhme throughout also allows this to read smoothly .Good luck in the contest Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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Hi Mystery Author, A delighful read and a nice acrostic for the contest. You bring the fairies alive in your story and presentstion also matched the words a touch of ryhme throughout also allows this to read smoothly .Good luck in the contest Cheers Christine
Comment Written 28-May-2019
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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Your thoughtful review is very much appreciated, Chrissy -- may you find laughter today in life's magical garden!
Comment from Liberty Justice
Leprechauns are such happy merry little things. I gave you my thumbs and you are already No. 1. Congrats Awesome. Read Review mine also. Such awesome designs. lolol liberty justice
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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Leprechauns are such happy merry little things. I gave you my thumbs and you are already No. 1. Congrats Awesome. Read Review mine also. Such awesome designs. lolol liberty justice
Comment Written 28-May-2019
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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Your review is much appreciated, Liberty -- may you find laughter today in life's magical garden.
Comment from Megan Wintrow
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem! You were able to convey a fully formed idea within the definition of an acrostic poem. You can bet that I will be imagining the fairies and leprechauns the next time I am in my flower garden! Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem! You were able to convey a fully formed idea within the definition of an acrostic poem. You can bet that I will be imagining the fairies and leprechauns the next time I am in my flower garden! Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Oh, Megan -- so very glad you enjoyed this one, ma'am -- I certainly had a wonderful time writing it! ;) ;) And the fact that it seems to have stimulated your memory of all those little faye folk just roaming around your garden is simply the icing on the cake for me today!! :) Enjoy them.... but be patient.... some times they are just a wee bit shy at first.... ;) ;) Take care! ;)
Comment from Mrs. KT
Oh Mystery Writer!
You never cease to delight me! (The fairies told me who you are!) :)
Such a lyrical and keenly imaginative ACROSTIC. GAWD! Acrostics can be sooooooooooo mundane, but not in your capable and creative hands!
Kudos!
diane
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Oh Mystery Writer!
You never cease to delight me! (The fairies told me who you are!) :)
Such a lyrical and keenly imaginative ACROSTIC. GAWD! Acrostics can be sooooooooooo mundane, but not in your capable and creative hands!
Kudos!
diane
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Hooray, I made the Michigan Lady smile -- my work here is done! :) So glad you enjoyed, my friend! ;) Have a wonderful week!
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem which is a perfect match You captured my attention from the first line to the last I love the movement of your words j
Your words made me wish I was there everyone seemed so happy. .
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem which is a perfect match You captured my attention from the first line to the last I love the movement of your words j
Your words made me wish I was there everyone seemed so happy. .
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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So glad you found the happiness in my poem this evening, Cookie! Thank you for the wonderful review and may you find laughter in your own magical garden of life. 8-)
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My pleasure
Cookie
