Close Your Eyes and Imagine...
An offering for the 25-word poetry contest15 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem for the 25 word writing prompt. You used very good words, thoughts and imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Best wishes in the contest. blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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This is a very well written poem for the 25 word writing prompt. You used very good words, thoughts and imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Best wishes in the contest. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Oh my goodness, Teri - what a lovely surprise! :) You have certainly put a smile on my face and just a bit of sunshine in my heart with your wonderful comments, ma'am --- THANK YOU!! ;) ;) Take care out there and have a wonderful Sunday! ;)
Comment from Gypsymooncat
I don't know what to say exactly about this, except it's excellent! In order to stick to the minimum character count in reviews, I'll say that it is sweet, lovely and paints a beautiful picture of a rainbow. I mean all that too, but can I stop now? Have I used enough characters?? My fingers are tired... I said it was excellent, and it is, and I hope it wins!!
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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I don't know what to say exactly about this, except it's excellent! In order to stick to the minimum character count in reviews, I'll say that it is sweet, lovely and paints a beautiful picture of a rainbow. I mean all that too, but can I stop now? Have I used enough characters?? My fingers are tired... I said it was excellent, and it is, and I hope it wins!!
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and your encouraging comments, Gypsymooncat! 8-)
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ah, jeez! This one actually makes me shiver! One of my favorite songs as a kid was "Somewhere Over The Rainbow", and then later, an Irish tune that spoke of a rainbow. *sigh* This little poem is SO romantic! Beautiful!
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Ah, jeez! This one actually makes me shiver! One of my favorite songs as a kid was "Somewhere Over The Rainbow", and then later, an Irish tune that spoke of a rainbow. *sigh* This little poem is SO romantic! Beautiful!
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Yes!! You know, I never even thought about that, but you're right! It does harken one back there.... you know, I know every line in that movie...? When I was a Senior, I was out 'partying' with some friends and the tryouts for the big Ampitheater production of the Wizard of Oz were going on and we 'decided' to 'crash' .... we each tried out for a part as a joke mostly, but guess who actually GOT the part? Yep! A blonde wicked witch of the west... had to do a little 'hair make-up' to play the part! :) ;) LOL! Okay, so that was your peek into 'silly things I did as a teen' for the day! ;) Take care! ;)
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HAHAHAHA! That's an image I am going to enjoy forever more now... HAHAHA!
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HAHAHAHA! That's an image I am going to enjoy forever more now... HAHAHA!
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Fantastic - I love this entry for the 25 words poem contest.
If only I had six stars to offer you right now. Ahhh, I am so sorry I am out.
I have read it more than once and every time I think the same at the end. Brilliant. Sweet rhyme - deep in meaning - reflective in content.
You got this in the bag I think. ~DDx
Ps - a virtual six for you :-)
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reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Fantastic - I love this entry for the 25 words poem contest.
If only I had six stars to offer you right now. Ahhh, I am so sorry I am out.
I have read it more than once and every time I think the same at the end. Brilliant. Sweet rhyme - deep in meaning - reflective in content.
You got this in the bag I think. ~DDx
Ps - a virtual six for you :-)
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Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Oh, DDx, you just made my evening -- I hesitated because this offering's one of my 'weirder' ones, but now I can breathe!! :) I'm so glad it put a smile on your face -- that makes it worth it right there! ;) Thank you, THANK YOU for the virt-six! ;) ;)
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Are you kidding me - who would not love this? One of your weirder ones - wow! Your weird is very good. ~DD :-)
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I think that is the BEST compliment I've ever received...THANK YOU and have a wonderful evening, DD! ;)
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Have a wonderful evening your end too :-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Rainbows are magical and I have never thought of stepping into one but I expect they would be enticing enough to never leave, especially if there was a pot of gold at the end, a fun write, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Rainbows are magical and I have never thought of stepping into one but I expect they would be enticing enough to never leave, especially if there was a pot of gold at the end, a fun write, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Many thanks for your review this evening!
