Letting Go
Contest entry6 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
I pity the lucky one who gets to wash your smeared and stained undies. I bet you let go from the depths... sounds like you are full of it. This is beautifully misleading then you let rip.
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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I pity the lucky one who gets to wash your smeared and stained undies. I bet you let go from the depths... sounds like you are full of it. This is beautifully misleading then you let rip.
Comment Written 28-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Hey, Lisa, hi. Wow. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer. You're the only one who mentioned that line. I thought that was the funniest of them all. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars, L. I'm glad you liked this silly little piece. Have a great day. Thank you again.
Ron
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No one else mentioned that line because they did not want to draw attention to the fact they had to think about your shitty undies. It would appear that I am not that refined. You are such a talented grubby bugger.
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Well done It made me laugh outloud and I admire your writing skill when rereading it I can see how each couplet led to the end result Best of luck Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Hi Well done It made me laugh outloud and I admire your writing skill when rereading it I can see how each couplet led to the end result Best of luck Cheers Christine
Comment Written 28-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Christine. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I was definitely fooled from the very beginning. What I saw was a beautifully created piece of art, something one could hang on their wall. Your title led me astray also (LOL).
Loved the way you framed your artwork and poem, and love the gray and white colors.
Your last line? Dang, I never saw that coming :)
This is an exceptional contest entry, and I truly wish you the very best!
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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I was definitely fooled from the very beginning. What I saw was a beautifully created piece of art, something one could hang on their wall. Your title led me astray also (LOL).
Loved the way you framed your artwork and poem, and love the gray and white colors.
Your last line? Dang, I never saw that coming :)
This is an exceptional contest entry, and I truly wish you the very best!
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review and the generous stars, Gale. Yeah, I like to lead people astray then hit them with some silly ending, lol. I'm glad you liked the piece. Thank you again.
Ron
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LOL ? this was a good one :)
Comment from LyndaS
Geez, poet, this is all wrong. GIRLS DON'T FART. Not even when they're asleep. Just ask them. Have to admit I thought this was entered into the wrong contest. Looks like some kind of romance post. But the ending of this totally cracked me up. Which was the goal of this contest. A great entry here and I wish you luck in the vote. Lynda
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Geez, poet, this is all wrong. GIRLS DON'T FART. Not even when they're asleep. Just ask them. Have to admit I thought this was entered into the wrong contest. Looks like some kind of romance post. But the ending of this totally cracked me up. Which was the goal of this contest. A great entry here and I wish you luck in the vote. Lynda
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Lol. Thank you for the great review, Lynda. Yeah, I was going for making it look romantic with the zinger at the end, lol. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars, L. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a wonderful rest of your weekend.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent poem and entry for the humor contest.
Excellent rhymes in the couplets and the required twist at the end.
Gorgeous presentation with the picture and embedded words.
When the contest is over, rewrite the last line, you'll have a excellent poem, too.
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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You've written an excellent poem and entry for the humor contest.
Excellent rhymes in the couplets and the required twist at the end.
Gorgeous presentation with the picture and embedded words.
When the contest is over, rewrite the last line, you'll have a excellent poem, too.
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Robert. Yeah, I might rewrite the last line when it's over.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
Welp. Yeah. You did it all right. You met all the criteria of the contest challenge as I read it. Five stanzas of two lines each - and leave the punch line until the end. The very END. *smile*
Cute. Good luck!
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Dear Mystery Poet,
Welp. Yeah. You did it all right. You met all the criteria of the contest challenge as I read it. Five stanzas of two lines each - and leave the punch line until the end. The very END. *smile*
Cute. Good luck!
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Robyn.