Forever Young
Poem of Seven Words or Less12 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written seven-wrod poem about being young at heart is our inner youth and beauty that no one can take from us and our hearts cannot get wrinkled up.
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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A very well-written seven-wrod poem about being young at heart is our inner youth and beauty that no one can take from us and our hearts cannot get wrinkled up.
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you for reading and sharing your encouraging comments.
Comment from Bill Schott
This seven-word poem, Forever Young, says a lot in a few words. The face of aging can be telling to the casual passerby. The inside story is more evident to those more closely involved.
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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This seven-word poem, Forever Young, says a lot in a few words. The face of aging can be telling to the casual passerby. The inside story is more evident to those more closely involved.
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you for reading and sharing your encouraging comments.
Comment from Spitfire
I like. I lived for a while with people 85 and older. So many were mean or rude or negative. I'm almost 77 and hope I don't get that way.
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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I like. I lived for a while with people 85 and older. So many were mean or rude or negative. I'm almost 77 and hope I don't get that way.
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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It's important to keep a young and joyful attitude inside so that we don't get mean and ugly on the outside! Thank you for reading and for the generous rating!
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
I enjoyed your poem and wisdom! If our hearts are full--no room exists for those type of thoughts! My best in winning the contest!
My best,
Deborah
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Dear Author,
I enjoyed your poem and wisdom! If our hearts are full--no room exists for those type of thoughts! My best in winning the contest!
My best,
Deborah
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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I'm glad you could relate to this piece and appreciate your taking the time to read and review.
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My pleasure
Comment from WryWriter
Oh, I do love this fabulous poetic work! Our minds could be ageless if we only allowed them such freedom! The artwork is also astounding! It goes well with the theme of this poem. I enjoyed reading your creation!
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Oh, I do love this fabulous poetic work! Our minds could be ageless if we only allowed them such freedom! The artwork is also astounding! It goes well with the theme of this poem. I enjoyed reading your creation!
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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I'm glad you could relate to this piece and appreciate your taking the time to read and review.
Comment from John Matthews
This was an exceptional yet simplistic poem. The language you used to relay your theme was enticing for the six words you could use. Awesome job and good luck in this contest.
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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This was an exceptional yet simplistic poem. The language you used to relay your theme was enticing for the six words you could use. Awesome job and good luck in this contest.
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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I'm glad you could relate to this piece and appreciate your taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is very, very clever and well thought out. Even though the outer garment is indeed aging, we can still be young in heart as you've so eloquently stated. I enjoyed the message conveyed in this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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This is very, very clever and well thought out. Even though the outer garment is indeed aging, we can still be young in heart as you've so eloquently stated. I enjoyed the message conveyed in this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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I'm glad you could relate to this piece and appreciate your taking the time to read and review. It is important to stay young at heart as we grow older.
Comment from Possummagic
I must say, I don't hand out sixes often but this tugged at my heart strings. How can so few words convert such a powerful message... and as ageing and wrinkling is inevitable, it absolutely does not have to reach our hearts. With very little effort we can be kind, gentle and generous. I really loved this poem. The imagery is perfect. Good luck in the contest.PM
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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I must say, I don't hand out sixes often but this tugged at my heart strings. How can so few words convert such a powerful message... and as ageing and wrinkling is inevitable, it absolutely does not have to reach our hearts. With very little effort we can be kind, gentle and generous. I really loved this poem. The imagery is perfect. Good luck in the contest.PM
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your feedback!
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You?re welcome.
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Words and art work tell much in this Seven Words poem. However challenging a very short poem is to give it depth, this poem has it.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Words and art work tell much in this Seven Words poem. However challenging a very short poem is to give it depth, this poem has it.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your feedback!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love these words, as we age we can keep our hearts young even if the rest of us looks old! I love your philosophy here, wise and loving words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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I love these words, as we age we can keep our hearts young even if the rest of us looks old! I love your philosophy here, wise and loving words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your feedback! It's important to stay young at heart.