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Comment from LisaMay
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This is terrific - our roadmaps of experience show on our faces, the wrinkles and furrows leaving clues that indicate our age and wisdom of acquired experience over the years.

 Comment Written 24-May-2019


reply by the author on 24-May-2019
    Thanks, LisaMay, I agree!
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
    Thanks, LisaMay, I agree!
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
    Thanks, LisaMay, I agree!
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
    Thanks, LisaMay, I agree!
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
    Thanks, LisaMay, I agree!
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
    Thanks, LisaMay, I agree!
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
    Thanks, LisaMay, I agree!
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
    Thanks, LisaMay, I agree!
Comment from jenintorre
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Tell me about it. It certainly does. Your seven word poem says such a lot. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen

 Comment Written 24-May-2019


reply by the author on 24-May-2019
    Thanks, Jen.
Comment from TPAC
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Indeed life has its mystery, being not much a thinker follow God view "the whole world is deceived", given view good enough for me. Bottom line the world has a lot of loud mouths. All stated in my opinion.

 Comment Written 24-May-2019


reply by the author on 24-May-2019
    Thank you, TPAC.
Comment from Willie P. Smith
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Excellent. You have described the face of age very well. I am 81 and the deepness of my wrinkles could be measured with a ruler. I have so many deep wrinkles, water would stand in them if I laid on my back during a rain. Your writing is well described.

 Comment Written 24-May-2019


reply by the author on 24-May-2019
    Thank you Willie. I'm sure they tell many stories.
Comment from victor 66
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My grandmother died at ninety-two and her face had so much character, that I will always remember her. You make a good point about an older person's face and what it symbolizes. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-May-2019


reply by the author on 24-May-2019
    Thank you, Victor!
Comment from kahpot
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What a wonderful short read, the adventures, ups and downs, and the strength we have shown certainly is portrayed in ones features, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 23-May-2019


reply by the author on 24-May-2019
    Thanks, kahpot.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have made effective use of all your words in this piece about age
and how it changes appearance, behind which are changing mindsets.
I often study people's expressions, wondering what caused them.

 Comment Written 23-May-2019


reply by the author on 23-May-2019
    Thanks, Janice.
Comment from poetwatch
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Ain't it the truth. No matter which way you turn or whatever you do you will find that life has imbedded in you the roads you have taken. Some will take you to heaven, but most are a living hell. :0 This is a good entry for the Seven Words or Less Poem contest.

 Comment Written 23-May-2019


reply by the author on 23-May-2019
    Thanks, poetwatch.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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Seven words of wisdom. One picture is better than one thousand words. Of course you picked a wonderful picture to make your words literally rise off the paper they are written on. Good luck!

 Comment Written 23-May-2019


reply by the author on 23-May-2019
    Thank you!
Comment from humpwhistle
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I like this entry. You point out an aspect of aging most of us neglect.
The trail that marks our travels. We don't always regard the character inherent in an elder's face. Shame on us.

Best of luck at the polls.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 23-May-2019


reply by the author on 23-May-2019
    Thanks, Lee.
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    Thanks, Lee.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
    Thanks, Lee.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
    Thanks, Lee.