Chip's Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Roadmaps"FanStory Collection
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Comment from A. Willow Bends
I absolutely love the photo chosen to go with this short piece. Overall perfection and this should certainly win in the contest. It is superb. Life does leave clues on our body and mind in numerous ways and this writer nailed it with this piece. Love it!
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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I absolutely love the photo chosen to go with this short piece. Overall perfection and this should certainly win in the contest. It is superb. Life does leave clues on our body and mind in numerous ways and this writer nailed it with this piece. Love it!
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
Absolutely right. Life leaves imprints across our faces... and our backs and legs and stomachs (for those of us who bear children.) And so much more. *smile* This was super. Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Dear Mystery Poet,
Absolutely right. Life leaves imprints across our faces... and our backs and legs and stomachs (for those of us who bear children.) And so much more. *smile* This was super. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Thank you, Robyn!
Comment from Dawn Munro
I think you have satisfied the contest's requirements brilliantly with this little gem. The picture you chose is perfect, only I'd say the glint in this man's eyes belies the message of the poem somewhat -- he looks up to shenanigans, doesn't he? LOL. (But that's charming -- he could still be a worrier and have led a hard life.)
Good luck!
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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I think you have satisfied the contest's requirements brilliantly with this little gem. The picture you chose is perfect, only I'd say the glint in this man's eyes belies the message of the poem somewhat -- he looks up to shenanigans, doesn't he? LOL. (But that's charming -- he could still be a worrier and have led a hard life.)
Good luck!
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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I agree about the shenanigans. Lines can be laugh lines as well;^) Thanks, Dawn!
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It was my pleasure!
Comment from Janet Foor
Great picture to compliment your clever seven word poem. Excellent job with this one and oh so very true.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Great picture to compliment your clever seven word poem. Excellent job with this one and oh so very true.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Thank you, Janet!
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
I agree: life does leave clues on our faces with past expressions we made. In seven words you told in your poem, a large story and smile lines instead of frown marks....
Excellent contest entry!
My best,
Deborah
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Dear Author,
I agree: life does leave clues on our faces with past expressions we made. In seven words you told in your poem, a large story and smile lines instead of frown marks....
Excellent contest entry!
My best,
Deborah
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you, Deborah!
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My pleasure
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I liked his poem, it spoke volumes to me, those wrinkles are well earned and he wears them with pride, I do the same with my own, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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I liked his poem, it spoke volumes to me, those wrinkles are well earned and he wears them with pride, I do the same with my own, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you, Dolly!
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Your presentation is fabulous and the poetic offer is so exactly right. Those clues cover our faces from simply living life. Loved this one. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Your presentation is fabulous and the poetic offer is so exactly right. Those clues cover our faces from simply living life. Loved this one. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thanks, Kiwi!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like the message of this. In many cases, the face an the eyes that haven't been tampered with by plastic surgeons will eventually tell the story. It is like a road map of sorts. This is very clever and well thought out. I like what you were able to say in so few words. Great job and well done!
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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I like the message of this. In many cases, the face an the eyes that haven't been tampered with by plastic surgeons will eventually tell the story. It is like a road map of sorts. This is very clever and well thought out. I like what you were able to say in so few words. Great job and well done!
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thanks, Jeffrey!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is so true. Our faces show our whole story. The eyes tell of the soul, the face of our loves, and hardships. This is a wonderful seven word poem. Well done and good luck. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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That is so true. Our faces show our whole story. The eyes tell of the soul, the face of our loves, and hardships. This is a wonderful seven word poem. Well done and good luck. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thanks, Sandra.
Comment from Rmocruz
I believe you have correctly complied to the writing prompt, with your
seven well chosen words. The photo-art selection is well complementing.
A worthy effort, best wishes.
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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I believe you have correctly complied to the writing prompt, with your
seven well chosen words. The photo-art selection is well complementing.
A worthy effort, best wishes.
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thanks.
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You're welcome.
